Reviews for Child of Two Worlds
thegrison chapter 1 . 3/22
LOL What a messed up story. You give us readers no info on what happen when, what ages they are, and how you changed who his mother was and what bloodline she had. The way you did it was all wrong. You messed up the story time line with no reason behind it.
Kingkong101 chapter 1 . 8/9/2019
Gay
Newline chapter 3 . 10/5/2018
So... Kiba attacked Naruto when his back is turned, then Neji try to kill him and Naruto's so called friends seems totally ok with that since none resent Kiba or Neji for it.
Are we supposed to like them ? I hope not.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/18/2016
Naruto Uzumaki-Namikaze
Mother:Kushina Uzumaki
Father:Minato Namikaze
Kittens Kat chapter 12 . 4/3/2014
THIS IS AN AMAZING STORY! THANK YOU!
Ancantsia chapter 11 . 6/30/2012
Yes! I finally found your story again! I have been searching for it for what seems like forever! Brilliant story, very origional plot line and well written with emotion. Thanks for writing!
Rei Uta chapter 12 . 1/8/2011
Despite the fact that I didn't like how some parts turned out, (curse be on you Oorochimaru!) it's was nice in the end. :3
icekrim91 chapter 12 . 8/31/2009
dang...this fic is very interesting and awesome...i find it very intense and very cool...i love the ending and i love the fact that naruto has a family..awesome job...can't wait to read more from you soon...awesome ending
Sphyco387 chapter 1 . 2/19/2009
It has been long sense you wrote this story. It was to put it simply beautiful. The character and story plot was elegant. Congradulations on such a well written peace of art. For that is what it is. A piece of art. I wish that i had read it sooner. Thank you for filling my head with it.

Best wishes,

Sphyco
May Eve chapter 12 . 9/20/2008
Wonderful! Well done!
MoonPrincess623 chapter 12 . 7/26/2008
I LOVE THIS STORY! It was really good! even though its been like 3 years since you finished it. I kind of hate waiting for stories to finish oh well, i loved this one!
Ghostlanxx chapter 3 . 5/3/2008
Your chapters seem to be becoming shorter and shorter :D

Kiba and Neji should really know when to stop - in a friendly spar you DON'T attack the opponent while his back is turned to you.
Ghostlanxx chapter 2 . 5/3/2008
Like the idea of Naruto figting Kiba. Hate the idea of him having panic attacks, although he should be very powerful.

Kiba got his ass kicked in the first chuunin exams by naruto, he'll have no chance whatsoever XD
Ghostlanxx chapter 1 . 5/3/2008
You should update the names :D

Also, I find Naruto to be a bit weird - I understand he had been tortured and all, but his actions are more of a 8 year old's than a 16 year old's...

Not to bash, I love the story so far
Mille Seseau chapter 12 . 3/16/2008
I really like this it's a really good fic I think I'll read all yur other work _
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