Really great so far- update soon, please?

the story when futur kim has to kill ron is pretty interesting and i understand the time thing

I see where this might go, but over all does look interesting to watch and see it all unfold...

I've waited for this story for ages, it's about time. The chapter was ok, but there were a whole bunch of mistakes. You hadn't updated for quite a while, it wouldn't have killed u to use some extra time of grammatic errors

Do update though

Interesting story so far. Got to wonder what Ron did but I think I have an idea why he did it. Angry about lost love maybe? Anyway since I'm not allowed to comment on time travel in general I'll just leave it at this.

Looking forward to the next update and more backstory. Drakken as a hero is an interesting concept after all. Then again maybe Kim is the villian. All about how you look at things.

Oh man, this story is so great. So what did Ron do in the future? Did he do it willingly, or was it an accident? Please write more soon. I can't wait to see what'll happen next.

..ive decided to read all your fics...lol,they are so different and yet soo good...this has a great idea to it, i want to know more about this evil ron(..evil ron...m...yeah!) and i get your talk on time travel(having played chrono trigger and chrono chross...chross is just as bad if not worse...traveling between the same world where you are alive in one and dead in the other, bringing people between worlds, having them meet eachother in a world or not even existing in that world at all...yeah...)also, i wouldnt kill hitler, i would allow him into the art school he was never allowed may have led a normal life if he had gotten in. my opinion is that is what turned him evil. it must of been a jew that wouldnt let him in so he became evil and killed the jews(im not against anyone though...*bows*)i like ...keep up the great chapters!

I am surprised that you have written this.

Had something similar in mind but sadly, it seems like I am once again beaten to the puch.

Anyway, despite what the detractors say, your story is pretty easy for me to follow.

Suspending my disbelief is easy enough, though the descriptions of the scenes in which the actions were occuring were a bit sparse I acutally liked the pace. Quick and to the point.

Not sure where you're heading with this but that may be the point.

I have a feeling you won't be contining this but hopefully, you shall.

Anyway, my email is Natasel96AtYahooDotCom

Hopefully we can talk more.

The experience the world had with Hitler was the original reason for the creation of the UN, so no one world leader would ever be capable of singlehandedly trying, and almost succeeding even, to take over the world. Killing Hitler would mean no UN. No UN would mean more and more wars. The world would have been worse off without living through the experience of someone like Hitler trying to take over the world and learning from it.

Day it Changed! Pleease!

Quite interesting so far. I look forward to any updates.

This is an excellent story! One in which my disbelief is easily suspended.

Future Kim's internal conflict is excellent.

I can't wait for the next chapter.

this chapter sucked ass it was to short but the others were good make it a bit longer next time

Not every chapter has to be filled with heart pounding action. I liked this one, even if it was a first draft. It helped to set the overall mood of the story.

Can't wait for the update.

Hmm... out of a recent slough of less than stellar works, this one seems a bit promissing. It perked my interest. And I don't have a lot to say here, except that the chapters could be a bit longer. Not ridiculously longer, but long enough to make the next installment worth reading. I can't tell you how annoying it is to wait for a next installment, only to find that it's a paragraph or two long.

Anyway, keep that pencil smoking.

-Unknown6-

PS: If it was physically/mathmatically possible, I would kill Hitler. But then again, how could I go back in time to kill him if I had already killed him 60 years ago? I'd probably be trapped in a paradox, but there is mathematics out there that suggest that nature cannot allow a paradox to exist. And my eyes are starting to cross, so I'll stop there. Yep!