Moving, emotional, and provocative. The writing is great and I like how you used more than one language but I would have liked the translation beside it in brackets [but thats just me]. You can only get better and I hope to see more.

I had read this story a while back, and have been searching for it ever since just so I could tell you how much I loved it. The photograph (you mention) of Marie and Jason had always intrigued me as well, and I think you captured the moment behind it perfectly. Short, angsty and to the point. Exactly how a story reflecting Jason's bitter past should be.

Loved it, great job! :]

Very well done, very in character. Makes sense with the added bonus of creativity. Applause!

I often wondered who took that picture of them in Supremacy because of how paranoid he is, good little story.

I loved it, how sad. I hated that Marie died. I like how Jason bought the camera. Thanks for the great read

Oh! :hugs Marie and Jason: Angsty! A snapshot of one of the few times they are happy together, and even then there is a cloud of unease over them. Bittersweet story behind Jason's fav photo.

Ah... very good

Deplicts scenes from the movie quite correctly but improved :D lol

good job on this

Great story, think it refelcts perfectly on how he responded to the situation. Perfectly. Love to read any more if you have them

Cheers

Max

Oh wow! I really love this story :D It's highly emotive and exceptionally well written. You have obviously put a lot of work into this story and it really shows :D Please write more! There aren't enough Bourne stories out there!

This is absolutely beautiful. I LOVE it! It sounds like something Ludlum would write. It's so awesome! Have you read the Bourne Identity/Supremacy? Because it sounds like you have from the language (not just the bad stuff lol). It's a great story. I can almost feel his pain by reading this, and I know that sounds dumb, but that's ok. :) Congrats for doing research! I can tell you were really into this. And your work paid off!

Just so you know, there is now a section for the Bourne movies, so you might consider moving your fic :) Wish I could read it, but I haven't seen the movie yet...I just happened to notice that they finally added a category for the movies and thought I'd let ya know :)

Nicely written movie-verse missing scene, good job!

Why did she have to die, now Jason is alone again...wa...then again, this does put him back on the market doesn't it...yipee!

Oh, finally!

I've been searching all over for some Bourne Identity/Bourne Supremacy fics for the book or movie!

And the first one I found was this one. And it was awesome.

I really love your characterization of Bourne-he's got a deeper, more human approach to him than we see him as, but still the same tense jumpiness that is so prevalent later on.

The bit with the headache was absolutely lovely, and your vocabulary really lends to the intensity of the scene.

I would love to read more Bourne fics by you, if you write anymore. Hint hint. ;)

cheers,

kits