| Reviews for Heartbroken |
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Guest chapter 4 . 9/26/2019 Fuck you asshole. I hope you commit suicide. Then hear your family tell you that you were a fucking coward, but for some goddamn reason dickheads like you think someone with suicidal thoughts or have taken their own lives did so for uncomplicated reasons. Oh, and fuck your Hermione. Bitch doesn't deserve Harry. |
AdonCa chapter 5 . 10/31/2018 Grrr... feeling suicidal should never be brushed off as selfishness or cowardice. When a person wants to end it all, they have reached a point where they are so miserable that they just want it to stop and can’t see a way for their lives to get better. Sorry... it’s just that suicidal depression is far from trivial and people who feel it don’t need support, not accusations. |
DragonTamer01 chapter 10 . 2/18/2018 I'm sorry, but I cannot bring myself to like this story. First, it feels unfinished at the ending. Second, I absolutely DESPISE suicide as a major plot point. Third, the fact that Harry is apparently STILL going to Privet Drive by the end of this story makes me want to VOMIT! WHY THE FUCK HAS DUMBLEDORE NOT HAD THOSE SOULLESS MONSTERS ARRESTED FOR CHILD ABUSE AFTER HARRY TOLD HIM HOW BAD HIS LIFE WAS THERE IN THIS STORY?! I could go on with things that I hate about this story, but I'm just going to stop, close this story, and never read it again. |
MrsH chapter 10 . 2/25/2017 Another lovely story. You are very good at romance stories with a twist or two. Thanks for sharing! |
riegert8 chapter 9 . 5/26/2013 I read this story 5 years ago, I decided to reread again to see if my opinion has change. I still think this is a good story, but someone should had told Harry that he took a coward way. |
Guest chapter 10 . 5/5/2013 lol luna and ron that's great. cute story |
I Am Coolio chapter 10 . 4/22/2013 Cuteness, how sweet. Glad to see that Ron isn't hung up over Hermione, I hate those when the two boys are fighting over her and she is like, "NO! STAY! BAD! I DON'T WANT YOU!" |
teachergirl chapter 1 . 4/7/2012 Harry couldn't walk at 15 months old? How slow is he? |
Dracoluver chapter 10 . 8/31/2009 I'm not saying tis is a good story...it's amazing! I'm not a fan of R/H at all! I don't see why Hermmione's not with either Harry of Draco! Ron's just out of it! I love this story! Don't stop making ones like this! |
KagetsukiVII chapter 7 . 2/27/2009 Might want to change something arthur is dead in AVALON he ruled CAMELOT just though you want to know XD |
old-crow chapter 10 . 12/14/2008 Very nice. You tied up most of the loose ends and left a bit on the table should you ever choose to come back for an add-on story. Thanks for sharing your story. O-C |
old-crow chapter 4 . 12/14/2008 Hi, I think chapters 3 and 4 would be stronger if you combined them and used scene breaks to indicate PoV changes rather than restate chapter 3 entirely from Ron's PoV. O-C |
riegert8 chapter 2 . 2/22/2008 I thought it funny and sad that Hermione would think "why can't I just tell him?...because I will hurt Ron" this told me that she is book or school smart but dumb in other parts of life. There is no easy path here because she was going hurt one of them, Hermione should to protect Ron and hurt Harry. |
riegert8 chapter 1 . 2/22/2008 Ok I am I miss something in the story, I thought that the only reason that Harry try to kill himself is because he did not get the girl. I somehow miss the part that Hermione/Ron are hiding thing from him because they thought it was best, well best for them. Hermione should have been smart enough to know that her relationship would have come to light sooner or later, when it does it might Harry think of what kind of friend he has. Add this secret to the mix I could see Harry trying kill himself. |
riegert8 chapter 10 . 2/14/2008 This is well written story. I could understand the reason that Harry felt that he had nothing to live, but I can't help to think that he remind me of my little sister in the way she did not get her way she would have a tantrum. It is sad that pain that Harry put his friends though, but the good thing is that he get the chance to heal. I admit I thought that I already made a review for this story, there is an lot I like about the story and some I don't. |