Great story. I love the dialogues between the characters, its entertaining and dramatic at appropriate times. I hope that you continue this story soon!

i love your usage of the southern slang. i find more of it in New York than Florida. well i don't live there so that doesn't mean anything really...

Who heard the plea? I hate cliffhangers because it takes a long while before you find out what happens, but ilove them because you can imaging the result and see if you were right.

That was so evil. I love it! Poor Danny. What does that ghost want with Danny's soul?

Are you going to be Evil to Danny? That would be awsome! I love it when the author goes Evil on Danny. That spirit is creepy. What does he need with the piece of Todd's soul? Is he some kind of soul stealer?

What is an ulna? What was that mist that the minotaur sucked out of Todd?

gah... I don't know how many times I've said this before to FF writers, but your writing talent is amazing, I wish I was half as good as you! I love this story... Your plot is so well thought out! And yet again, I find another Danny Phantom story with references to TUE... curse Canadian television programming. I haven't been able to see any of the movies, and episode-wise I'm still waiting to see Pirate Radio. But anyways, I'm tangentizing (yes I'm aware that isn't a real word .~) so back on track, I love your story. I hope you update soon, stowies like these keep me insane... keep writing!

grace

Awesomeness as usual! Poor Danny. He's such a sensitive character. Slightly emotional too. But you gotta love the hero.

Brilliant chapter, and I look forward to more of course. Romance between whom...? That is so unfair. You know, you're the only writer on here besides me (On DP) that still replies to their reviewers. REBELS ON THE LOOSE, ha ha.

So...just wondering, but will Conley end up gettin Jazz? Or will it be explained more next chapter?

Gotta jet, Lateraina Wolf

Woah. Lot of emotions going there... Usually I don't like negativity-filled stuff, but that was pretty good. I can't wait to see how it all turns out in the end!

-Silver Latias

good chappy

I'm sorry if this review sucks. I'm still getting over "The Ultimate Enemy". O_o

Alright, you finally got back to Danny. And he is very pissed. XD Can't blame him, though...

of corse you can! its frozen though i hope thats ok... anyway i. am. HYPER! OFF CAKE(chocolate)PUDDING(chocolate)HOT CHOCOLATE(chocolate)AND NEARDS!(not chocolate and the candy NOT the people! i'm not a canible!) heheheh update soon! until then i will drown in danny phantom reruns (i got tebo so i'm ok!(explodes)i ment to do that!)bye! and you ROCK!

Really? Poop...I read that story of yours about a year back...and replied twice. Ah well. IT'S ME! And if you still don't remember me, I used to be Blossoming Orange Rose here.

Yay for angst! I love how Danny gets so (for lack of a better word) annoyed here! Awesome! Can't say anything else, though...

Wait, this has a sequel? NEATO! When I saw your story up again, I said to my friend over IM: "HOLY - !" without the dash. Yes. You're that cool!

hey i'm sane again... i think. at least untill the chocolate pudding kicks in. well we all need insanity in owr lives i just provide it for every one else aw darn i'm rambleing haha it must be really hard for you to type this i should know i ran out of ideas for my fic messing with tecnology eh i'll figure it out so today instead of giveing you one of those crazy review that demand and hurt (though some how strangly energise) i will ask of you to type it if you can but i will patiantly wait until it's up. uh... wow i think i just put half the reviewers to shame... heh... bye

Ahh...finally. I got the chance to read one of my favorite stories. I actually had to reread it over again cause it's been so long ago when I first read over it.

As usual, excellent chapter and I expect to see some more. Maybe more hints about this female boss perhaps?

I know on your website that you said you weren't really into D/S romance. That's cool too, even though I am a fan of it. But I was wondering if maybe you were thinking of putting Eliza and Danny together? I can sort of see them together, but since I work with D/S so much, I can see them together more. But it's still cool. A little mix up now and then does some good.

Very awesome chapter and I can't wait to read more! I love the fact that this story has a sequel. Can't wait for that either. Continue soon please!