I dunno o-o the way you typed it seemed like he would never see moutuou again. Though really XDD I think this is great how Ryou act's to Yugi I can practically understand it. *tilts head* I'm wondering how Atemu would have gone by it though... eh oh wells XD

It's really really good, but it'd be helpfull if you put quotations whenever ryou or bakura speaks.. or anyone else for that matter xD It get's confusing trying to figure out 'alright they thinking or speaking?'

OMGOMGOMOMG! This is interesting. This is quite good really. Honest

oh :o that's messed up man. at the wedding? baku has absolutely no sense of self control -_-

hey, so i have two things to say: one good, one maybe bad, depending on your point of view.

Good: This story ROCKS! Very well written, and overall just a great quick read!

Bad: it's a bit confusing, cuz i'm used to reading stories that call Yugi's yami "Yami" and Ryou's yami "Bakura". You call them the same thing, so it's a bit hard to understand which one you are talking about.

and, Dawn Massacre is OUT!

This was quite...interesting, and a little misanthropic what with Ryou's point of view, but I think it was very well written, and probably very in character.

Although, I was a bit surprised at how...hostile he was to Yugi (compared to how he usually was in the earlier seasons anyway) but it all makes sense in the long run. Although, I'm still curious as to what happened between Yugi and Yami... (though I'm glad you kept it where they are spirits without bodies...)

I liked this story very much, good work D

I love this story 'cuse the sumury would lable it as mildly cliche.

I read the first chapther and it hade all the trappings of a complet and utter wast of my time, like bad writing at first blush. Something inside me made me want to read chapter 2, and then first re-read some bits of chapther 1. AND OH! it was there and clear to me as day.

Myself sed 'hey'.

And _I_ said hm? Myself had a wicked/evil/delicious grin

'I sence a "MindFuck"

I lit up like a christmasstree and told my self that you do.

I reveled in the confusing-ness _BUT_ its only confusing if you don't know the game. I knew but I didn't know how _this_ game was going to be played.

I freakn' love this S*#$

and yes, I can't spell worth a damn.

-this is Kanzaki, you've just made me able to face anotherday, out _~!

I love this story, its wicked...

I shall explaine after I finish reading the rest of it.

*feral grin*

Yay for Yugi-bashing! Fun fun! Ryou bashing Yugi is different and fun, more fun then anyone else bashing the twerp..

Hm, when did I begin hating Yugi? I've never like Yami but... Oh well!

O_O;; I found this quite entertaining, and slightly funny. Although...sad too. Hahah.

LOVEIT LOVEIT LOVEIT! Good God, if I had a top favorites list in my favorites, this would be on it. This is the BEST Bakura/Ryou fic I've read. It's s-ai without being yaoi! I LOVE IT! _

~Kat

aw! I'm really loving this story! But what was it that Bakura...Yami told him exactly?

o another good chapter!