Great story. Please update and make a sequel.

Now this is a story! It has everything a growing Trekkie needs. A Q-nundrum, Riker problems and psychological...stuff.

I loved the character of Miranda Riker, not just because she knocked poor William around but because she's also a very convincing character, you've portreyed her very well indeed.

I'm kind of hoping you may create a sequal, cause I'd love to see her character in later periods of the TNG timeline.

Awesome!

Hey,this was really entertaining. I like all of the psychological tension, and I always thought Kyle was the kind of guy to father a few "mistakes" and leave them out in the cold.

I wanna know more about what the sadistic Q did to Miranda in her childhood, though. There's not a lot of details about that, it left me wondering. Maybe I'm just morbidly curious.

Anyway, cool story, and I'd love to see what happens to Miranda afterwards.

awesome! amazing! love it...can't wait to see the next chappy! the whole power of the Q thing was awesome, and we all know he's gonna have to stick his head in sometime soon! keep it up!

Aw. Sweet, hopeful ending. Is there going to be more? I like that chapter, especially the characters' interactions. It was really cute. Love it!

Okay, so when you say more coming...you mean now right? Or how bout...now? Cause now is good... PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update again ASAP...this is one of the FEW stories I come on everyday to check. Can't wait to read the rest!

Pretty good. I like that the "original" Q has his old arrogance back. But I still don't understand why he would help them like that. Why would Miranda be important to the continuum?

I mean, they're Q, they don't care all that much about lesser beings. Most humans don't care if they step on an ant.

But well, it's your choice to write it like that, and I still think your story's good.

Although I can't stand Miranda. She's this stupid bratt, and they're talking about her like a heroine.

Ah, very dramatic. The description and intesity is good, but I can't help feeling that the chapter exaggerates a little. Park's way of action in this chapter isn't quite understandable, and by the I don't mean the torturing(cause he IS a sadist), but his other actions. It would be more reasonable for a Q to just not have the set of moral that keeps you from hurting a weak, and primitive(from their POV) individual, and to enjoy hurting them at the same time.

However, I still like what you've done with getting them all into Miranda's brain, the mental picture.

What the...? What IS Q up to? It's driving me NUTS!

UPDATE!

~Lenni~

Wow, I like what you did with Miranda's psyche. It's very complex, and shown as several episodes in her life. Amazing!

I'd have to remark one negative thing though. I love your story, but it always seems a little like "everyone loves poor Miranda". Even if she's been treated badly before, life won't just make it right by everyone loving her now. It's just a little sudden, and though her reactions to them are understandable, theirs to her are not quite.

It feels wrong, I can't explain it any better. But I know that I'm doing the same thing in my story, and I don't like it.

Besides that, you did an awesome job!

Very good! You got me there, I just need to finish the story and can't stop reading.

It's great how you'Re describing the short ego battle between Q and Lwaxana.

Hope that stupid Park gets killed! Duh.

Continue...

Q? Whoa. He somehow always popps up if there's no explanation for anything. Interesting plot though! I think Q is an interesting character to bring in. Now we know it's gonna get even more confusing. And yay, Lwaxana is in it, too! She's so crazy, it's great. Her way of arrogance is...unique.

Well written chapter, very exciting. Keep going with this!

Aw, that's sad. What's wrong with Miranda?

Great story so far! Good plotline, nice writing style!

Guinan's a real smartie, with all of that symbolic language.

I wonder who this Eddie is. There's some secret about Miranda, isn't there? What is she hiding?

I hope her relationship to Will gets better over time. It should! After all, he is the only relative she has.