UPDATE THAT WAS AWESOME!

This is great! I cant wait untill the next chapter

Ahh, this is nice. I like your supporting cast, and especially Christine, and how you don't shy away at all from the fact that she is a confused, emotionally disturbed teenager. With Erik, too, you write what a lot of people somehow manage to read the Leroux and overlook, which is, yanno- He's a psychopath! He kills people for dramatic effect! He's a borderline rapist! So, yeah- good for Christine and her soccer thighs, and good story, miss.

Hs Erik killed the students? He put their lives in danger at least. It seems Elizabeth is finally realizing she's in danger. She forgot that even if she's strong, Erik is an adult man. They're usually stronger than grown women and teenagers. I seems she didn't Erik as much as she thought she did. Now, she's in real and grave danger.

...*gasp*! Please update soon!

*gasp*...DUN DUN DUN!

Can't wait for next chapter!

Elizabeth is WAY over her head. That kid is so unhappy, she and her dad need to see a therapist immediately. Her teacher is much more dangerous than she thinks and she's very naïve if she finds amusing the fact he's a potential pervert. He's done something to Jessica's water and it seems he wants the sculpture to fall on the performers.

woot woot! scary notes! scary notes!

please update soon!

Eh, I don't know how Elizabeth could do it, being cheeky with Miss Lazerth. The girl is so in over her head! She doesn't even realizes she's in danger. This Erik seems to be a psycopath, there's something very wrong with his behavior. Why does Miss Lazerth gives the good parts to Jessica when it's obvious Elizabeth is better? Poor Elizabeth is in trouble with scary Miss Lazerth.

Wow, it's a cool story. Elizabeth is in WAY over her head but she's too young to realize that. It's sad she hasn't any confident. She's cutting herself, too. She's got Major issues. The guidance counselor is a bitch. Yes, Sean doesn't have the grades to go to Yale BUT there's a way to say this to a teenager and why on Earth are they leaving the door open. It' supposed to be confidential. It's about time though Elizabeth thinks about colleges.

Wow. I totally love this.

Your characters are so in-depth that if you told me they were real people, I'd believe you. Elizabeth is the furthest from a Mary Sue that she could be and her thoughts are candid and funny. Even her situations feel real- An annoying ex-crush, a boring boyfriend, the big-breasted friend. Not to mention, the scenes with the Phantom are just... tantalizing.

Update this soon.. It is incredible. Definitely one of the best I've seen on here. Btw, your last chapter is hilarious!

I liked this chapter, your writing had -definitely- improved. The only word that I thougght was misued was how the audience would be "incensed", because I thought that usually meant to enrage, you know? You may want to check that out.

Erik was flowery and it was funny, so I liked how Elizabeth reacted. It was very realistic, because though I'm very dramatic, in a fic...no. Just no. So I liked that a lot.

Update soon!

This is a great story. I am really enjoying it. I can't wait til your next update.

Aah!

I really like how this is turning out- especially Erik's story, what we know of it so far...the fact that he's an old student just "lurking", as Ms. Larzeth put it, gives the right mood for his character/the story in that he actually seems somewhat frightening (as opposed to some phics where Erik is nothing but a hero- which is nice, but defeats the point of his character).

Okay- that may not have made sense- but the point is, I really like this so far- keep going!

Oh, I was impressed with this. I was afraid it would be horribly Mary-Sue ridden. I liked Elizabeth's and Sean's physical flaws, which make them so much more realistic. If Amy is going to be the Meg-figure, I'd think that she'd be more supporting, but that's all right. I could've done without the audition piece, which is a bit of a cliche, but otherwise I liked it.