You should continue on with this story.

Are you sure about keeping it a oneshot? This could go on to be something great, you know. No? How about a sequel, then?

It was actually quite sweet. I love how you switched POV's so smoothly, it's kind of like watching a movie in my head. _ Please, continue to write.

Hehehe, very cute. _ Don't quit while you're ahead! No! It's always fun to see new people on !

YAY! That was so good! Poor Virginia, being left alone like that. She should knock some sense into him! Yeah! A! Please write more in the future.

You shouldn't quit! This is really very good.

Sigh, that's so cute!

I really enjoyed it! I like your way of portraying the characters; it's right to the point! Please write some more WA fics! Can't wait to read them!

Teefa: I thought it was nice. It really shows how much she cares. You got Jet's attitude to the letter as well; I could see him trying to ignore his wounds and fight her emotions.

Rutee: This really sets up for a sequal if you want to write it. Sometimes a cute little one-shot can turn out a really beautiful romance fic later on. We wrote a songfic about Jet and Virginia, and it spawned a one-shot that we threw with the songfic, a trio of stories about the future of the cast, and two sidestories with an accompanying songfic.

Lufia: I agree, you could probably get a real nice sequal from this. Or even a new fic with no connection. But I really liked it.