Why did he kill Bulma and then talked about her pain? Apart from that it was good.

You are a gigantic faggot..

its was creepy my friend would LOVE this

It was good but confusing. Vegeta seemed weak towards the end if it. Were they suppose to be humans in this fic? And I really don't understand why trunks would kill his mom when clearly she loves him.

very morbid, dark, and gory but i love it :D

:o that was my face! This is an amazing story, and I don't usually like dark fics!

...holy...crap... THE AWESOMNESS IS OVER 9000AAAAAAAAAAAAANNNNNNDDDDD!

Hmmmm...that was really GOOD!

I liked it...you should really try to make a part 2 to this!

xxXP0L0SW GG Xxx

You wrote a great fanfiction here, even though it's so dark.

However, I personally think that Trunks is a bit out of character. Vegeta never acted like he HATED his son. If anything, he was a little pushy towards him so that he'd grow stronger and unleash his full strength, like when he said "You should rest son. 150X gravity is a MAN's training level."

But as Vegeta said in the Buu saga as he was about to die.

"Trunks...you've made me very proud."

With all that in mind though, awesome fic!

This was dark lol..Vegeta would have wooped that ass if Trunks tried to fight him lol..I liked it none the less even though I hate to think of Vegeta being abusive to Bulma and Trunks..

Well I'm reviewing,this was beyond demented,but well written,all in all,great story 10/10

you are so sick and twisted... BUT I LOVED THIS FIC SO MUCH! INCREDIBLE! I LOVED EVERYTHING ABOU IT... MUST READ MORE T.T

That was totally Gruesome! I Loved it!

Y DID U make him insane? i don't get it? Vegeta would like kick his son's ass! or atleast fight back! eh! i don't understand, y waqs vegeta suddenly so worried? it was good but confusing! plaese tell me what u ment by trunks killing his dad? i'm sorry but thats just out of charactor 4 trunks!