Oh man, I really like this. I know 6 years is probably long enough to safely assume it's not getting continued, but just so you know, I really like how you've done these characters :)

Haha, that's real cute! Approxiametly how old are they here?

Ugh, that was so great I don't even know where to begin.

It was very different from the other fics around here, which I must say is a *very* good thing. You took your time with the storyline and you didn't write any of that typical clichéd "Oh, (Ash/Misty), I've been waiting so long to say that I love you", etc.

I loved the pace of it; the little bits labeled as chapters were short, but in a perfect way. It paced the whole story on very nicely. It could have been just a one-shot, but I really adore this format of yours much better.

Great job, I'm definitely adding this to my favorites.

I love the pace of this story. So patient, calm, just a wonderful read, thanks for this!

“I’m happy for you. Will you come visit me sometimes, or should I just stop kidding myself and come with you?”

CUTE!

hm...

Majigney-Foofoo

I was looking for another fanfic when i found yours. Not bad. ELECTRICITY RULES!

well, i read the whole fic! is there gonna be more chapters?

ur an osm writer. keep up the excellent work!

This was one of the best fanfiction stories ever! I really enjoyed reading this! Thanks for a great story!

Hihi!

Guess who I am... Wrong!

I'm your brother! Me, Jake. Yay. Just in case your wondering, I feel a little... funny... right now. Anywho, you should really update this thing, its, like, empty compared to what you showed me at home. Ok... I realise that you can't update THAT often but still... you should! And, yeah, thats my pen name, Neiros! READ MY BIO! And if Nadene is there... GO AWAY!

Sorry i havnt been able to review sooner,i was kinda chapter was very nice,and maybe thought you dont think so,but almost every chapter was a cliffhanger to me,and this ones no execption!heh heh,great chapter,keep it up.I completely agree with Pikaah(or whatever-no offence to the the writer)when he says that its a wonder that you dont get many what,mine doesnt too!But mines not as good as keep writing,the suspence is killing me!

-A Pikachu Pal-

P.S.:If ure wondering who this is,its Pika786.I just changed my name.

Oh never mind, this isn't your first o0;

Hm, it's a wonder you haven't gotten more reviews..this story is the best I've read in quite a while. ; And this is your FIRST Pokémon fanfiction..I'm impressed..I hope to see more Pokémon fanfictions from you in the future :D

Thanks a lot!Very nice and keep it up!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE(Ok u get my message)CONTINUE!Lovely Story!