Wow, I didn't realize anyone had actually read this, I had forgotten about it a long time ago after there were no readers. I'll definitely consider writing on this some more, and I'll probably post it on the UT section as well. Thanks for the feedback.

You're quite talented at writing and it is a shame that you haven't updated this in quite a while. You should just put it in the Unreal Tournament section, it's become dead lately and I'm sure the fans would appreciate it.

This is a cripping story. Im a big fan of unreal and was hoping for a story so it could explain more.

are you going to write a book?

and if yes plz hurry cause your chapters are awsome. i think chapter 3 is best so far. would like to read a team deathmatch if possible, and if he could meet a m8 or something in there so they could fight. that would really test jacks emotions. email me back as soon as possibe for ur answers.

thx ur pal james