No! Update update update!

Why is there no more? I need it, need it, NEED IT!

I think this is a start to your story and look forward to reading more.

APOLOGY ... Ugh, I just wanted to humble myself for not reading through my own review prior to posting ... Lordy, you must have thought, 'What in the heck is that suppose to mean?' It should have read as follows:

[ QUOTE: I am pleased you look for quality, it shows that you have a vested interest in your work and how your work is perceived. Your offering here demonstrates those possibilities. ]

Again my sincerest apologies. is evil for allowing only one 'Signed Review' per chapter. Poot. Feel free to email if you feel a need.

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Phedra

Popped over to R/R after reading your post on the Sycophant Hex boards. Your plotline is interesting and has possibilities. Your canon characterizations are spot on in many many instances. I really enjoyed the humour in this piece.

I will have to agree with Becky here, a beta reader would be highly recommended. I also noticed tense changing, deviations from continuity in thought, and a couple of missed typos. There is a bit of POV [Point of View] confusion, but most readers can work through that.

You did mean & I quote, 'The precious Boy Who Lived will fear the Malfoy NAME.' Right? Anyhow, you have the makings for a very entertaining fic on your hands.

Obviously you wish to make it the best that you can or you wouldn't have asked for help from the folkes of at Hex. I am pleased you look for quality, it shows you it in you to produce it and your work here has also demonstrated those possibilities. Keep up the good work!

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Phedra

Good start. There was some confusion of tenses, and a few minor spelling errors (ie mincing instead of menacing), but it wasn't overly distracting. Nice use of simile in several places. I would suggest enlisting a beta reader to help catch those little errors.

It's an interesting premise, and an excellent first attempt.

Oh, this is definitely going on my favorites list and you say this is your first fanfic? It's great.

The students are a bit in character since Draco Malfoy was his usual self in the beginning and well, it's your story, you know waht happens.

Pansy Parkinson however does seem a little odd, but as we were never really introduced to her character, it's okay.

So what I'm trying to say is that this story is great.

OMG! Draco's a mudblood? What will he do now? HERMIONE WILL FREAK! I can't wait for the next chapter! PLEASE PLEASE update soon!

This is really, really great for a first fic. I'm assuming you've written other things before, because you obviously know what you are doing. Good job. This really gives a good explanation to why Draco might change, and given the circumstances, I think he's very in-character. Now, enough boosting your ego. Get to updatin' soon please!:D

-HermyGWeasley