What a nice piece of prose. I always want to kind of go back in time and read earlier-dated pieces. I'm happy I found this one! Your imagery is good. I like the image you paint of Tristan in this one. He's not all ice! Good job.

ow, cute!

interesting prologue. you've got me intrigued.

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I had to bite back my tongue as well as it came to the lady escorted to her betrothed's estate. Damn. But well, this just can't have a happy ending, can it. To use his senses to describe his thoughts about her was such a good idea, and it matched his scout personality so well. Yay.

Beautiful and heartbreaking again - well, how could any tale of Tristan and Isolde end happily? I'd begun to wonder how she might fit into the movie-version of events, and this fits the bill exactly. The list of senses and the ways in which Tristan observes Isolde through them is a lovely device and one that works perfectly; and the twist of tragedy at the end is the perfect bittersweet conclusion. *dries eyes* Wonderful.

I really like it. Very poetic and decriptive. I like how it fallows the actual story of Tristan and Isolde.

Oh... That was beautiful. Wow. Really quite beautiful. Short and bitter-sweet. Really lovely.

I love it! You have a great diciption of Tristan! I would say more, but I'm speechless! You must make this longer! Great chapter!

Goth Musician

Nice! Wonderful description with the alabaster cheeks and the pert nose. Lovely.

wow, i'm in awe, that was sorrowfully beautiful. I loved that immensely. It sort of made me want to cry.