Reviews for In The Beginning There Was Darkness
Cahaya Sidur chapter 9 . 5/27/2019
This story took me by surprise. I was wondering if the characters were going to be wildly different, especially since some AU stories do take a drastic turn with their personalities, but you manage to keep it grounded with the right reasons behind them. One thing that I really love is that relationship between Raven and Starfire - instead of letting it get full out petty and JUST about Robin - Starfire's reasons are noble, if not twisted by her prejudice. Their acceptance of their relationship really does bring hope that they'll get along soon, and it's a fantastic way to end the chapter.

The growing relationship between Robin and Raven - and Cyborg - does make me smile. Thank you for writing this story and sharing it with us.
Rainbow Prime chapter 3 . 2/11/2019
You're just feeding into them by making it so that everyone who reads your story knows what they said and how it affected you. In the future, remember this simple tip for when you find a review like that on one of your stories, or one of your friends stories: Sarcasm is your second best friend, being a bigger jerk is your first. Here's what I mean by that: if the person who left the review also left their username, send them a PM saying that you have connections in the [insert appropriate CIA style acronym here] and that, even now, those contacts are tracing the username back to the person who has it, and that they will contact you with the home address of the person who has the username as soon as they have it, so that you can go track that person downThis is what I meant by being a bigger jerk is your first best friend. They can't do anything with this P.M., because you haven't actually made any threats against their person. As for sarcasm being your second best friend, what I mean by that is (first you'd need to P.M. the individual, so it relies entirely on them leaving their review while logged in): AW SHIT YOU LITTLE BITCH...I HAVE TO AGRE WITH OTHER GUY ON THIS ONE TIHS STORY SUCKS ASS BUT THEN ALL YOUR OTHER STORYS SUCK ASS HOW MANY TIMES DO I HAVE TO SAY IT RAVEN AND ROBIN DONOT GO TOGETHER YOU STUPID FUCKHEAD. I HATE THIS FUCKING PAIR AND I HATE ALL THE PEOPLE WHO WRITE ABOUT STOP WRITTING BECASE YOU SUCK. DAMN.
The sarcastic response to this review that would bite back twice as hard as the review itself would be something along the lines of: "Aw...I'm so impressed with your review! I mean, I've apparently been spelling words like AGREE; THIS; STORIES; DON'T; and WRITING wrong ever since I learned how to spell them in that government funded institution called Elementary School! Wait a second...no...I'm pretty sure that all of the spellings for those words were taught by people who had several College Degrees to your, what, GED? Wait...that assumes that you made it to High School. You might not have. Sorry about assuming that you had made it to High School." Whether or not you put something in about InGlorious Bastards is up to you. I would, but that's just me. Or, if that response sounds too mean, then there's always the classic line from The Big Lebowski: That's just, like, your opinion, man. Either one of the two iss sure to get a better response then feeding into the behavior shown in the Author's Notes.
keverly houtz chapter 3 . 8/29/2018
Starfire should be the to talk how do we know we can trust her!
HeartOfChaos13 chapter 3 . 11/30/2017
This chapter Is good and Isn't Azarath a different dimension?.
HeartOfChaos13 chapter 1 . 11/30/2017
This chapter Is good and I think that It's Interesting.
mistalenny chapter 3 . 7/6/2017
That roast towards Steve
something-to-probe chapter 9 . 3/4/2017
I just realized that most of the books ive read and loved are made by you
something-to-probe chapter 3 . 3/4/2017
You should add drama in tag(?)theme(?) (I dunno what thats called) im crying right now TTTT
GnCdwll chapter 9 . 8/4/2016
OMG THIS IS SOO SWEET I CRY. I feel bad for Starfire tho since you made her such a bitch xD but WTH I ship RobRae so haaarrd! I love how you've made RobRae fic an innocent type of love since they're only like 16 or smth :D I hope to read more RobRae sweet moments from you some time :D LOVE LOVE LOVE
keverly chapter 6 . 5/2/2016
Star fire is bitch and needs to get a life and got what was coming to her and how dare she vandalize raven's room!
keverly chapter 5 . 5/2/2016
I loved it
Merida chapter 2 . 12/20/2015
I love it it is so positively percolation
LilLinkGirl chapter 9 . 10/21/2015
Cool but are ya gonna continue?
kevely chapter 8 . 8/8/2015
Now things are getting good !
keverly chapter 7 . 8/8/2015
I loved it
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