Ha! That was good. I always enjoy outsider POVs of characters we love.

I really like your OC, and the way you oppose the idea that being a ninja is the ideal profession. Because we all know that it would really freak us all out.

I don't usually tolerate OC-centric fics... But this one was beautifully written. I applaud you.

This was among the best non shinobi POV one shot stories I have ever read.

Thank you for writing. :)

Wow, That was really interesting.

It was really easy to slip into the character's shoes. She was relateable and I laughed out loud a few times at her commentary.

especially the line about, Team seven are ninjas, I could be a ninja. Because honestly, isn't that the impression they give off? Kakashi's such a slacker and Naruto and Sakura are such kids. The only one with a air of ninjaness is Sasuke.

I also liked how she kept questioning and even Naruto didn't directly answer her. I never though of them being so secretive around civilians, but really I should off.

This was really well written and insightful. Thanks for sharing!

Great story. I think everyone at least once imagines themselves as some sort of superhero like a ninja. Rarely to they contemplate the difficulty of those positions. Again, good job.

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It gets you thinking thats for sure. Keep it up!

Really enjoyed that read. Your first-person narration was flawless, and I loved the tale. You captured Team 7 from the outside looking in, and I loved how your OC's interacted. All around wonderful!

hehh, that was amazingly accurate for something that we have such little information on, (with the civilians, that is). I say it was a job well done!

You know what? I really would like to give you a reward.

There is so little in cannon but not 'along cannon' stories. And I never before read one like that, about their daily missions. It's great and original. I regret there aren't more like this one.

Excellent work! This is probably the best fic I've read that takes the idea 'there's a price for being so badass, and it isn't pretty' and examines it so effectively. Solid work capturing what I think would be the behavior and conversation of Team 7 on a 'mundane' C-ranked mission, too.

An enjoyable read, thanks for writing it.

I like how you used a normal villager point of view. It seems more realistic and relates to how our views would be like if we had ninjas to protect us in real life. Also, I like how you portrayed team 7's little glimpse of their way of life. And how its totally different from our's.

That was actually... really, really good! You captured the characters PERFECTLY, you put in great details, and it was overall a very well written piece.

Great fic! It was interesting to see Team 7 from the eyes of an outsider, and one who had dreamed of being a ninja like that.

I like this OC, she's so normal.