I'm back to reading this wonder of a story, though it took me forever to find it once I knew I wanted to reread it again. This story will NEVER lose it's luster.

For years this has been one of my favorite stories and still is! I'll keep up hope that you update it someday! Great writing!

this is utter crack. i dont know if this is intentional, but i just love how hilarious this is. i love how jiraiya is using akiko and kakashi's budding relationship as writing material... because that's totally MOOD! lol. they're ooc, but it's cute so yeah. i was hoping to see the finish material of jiraiya's work in this story "Icha Icha Paradise Vol 8" like... i cant wait to see akiko's reaction to seeing that. and kakashi's because as a fanboy it's based on real events lmao.

Oh my god Jiraiya! I can’t! The giggles are killing me lmao!

I don't get it, is his name, Obito or Okito? I also can't get a grasp on the age of the characters, I thought the oc was a child based on the fact that they can't seem to leave the house without permission but they're reading porn or something? and Kakashi became an Anbu while he was pretty young but because he has an unusually long career as an Anbu there's not exactly a way to tell where he's at age wise, especially with the possible "Obito/Okito"? character. if its Obito then he's at the early junction of his career but if its Okito then obviously he's past the death of both Rin and Obito and possibly even past Minatos death.

One day you might take this story up again, and it will be most wondrous. This story is glorious.
-HO

EVEN WORSE the last time the fic was updated was freakin 2009 omg DO NOT UNDER ANY CIRCUMSTANCES READ THIS FIC YOU WILL BE LEFT BROKEN AND EMPTY ONCE YOU REALISE YOU ARE UNABLE TO SWIPE LEFT OR CLICK THE LITTLE ARROW FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER YOU WILL DIE A THOUSAND DEATHS INSIDE

it's 4:41 and now I feel like that post of Kakashi when he was reading a book the entire night and forgot to fill in his reports. but I also feel unprecedented desperation and anguish because the story isn't finished. Are YOu KIddiNG mEee? I want to fall into a comma and wake up when it's finally finished just so I don't have to go through this again. Also wtf I usually don't care for civilian OCs but this is a piece of art and anything who thinks otherwise will have their teeth stolen! who had the email of the author, let me have it, they said it's not rude to send them emails and remind them to relase a new chapter, oh god I haven't looked up what was the last time a chapter was released, if it's 2011 I'm definitely going to commit seppuku and destroy a tradition of regaining honour for the Japanese with my selfish act, oooh the almighty author please prevent this international incident from happening

I've reread this story so many times over and it is still funny every single time.

This story has had me laughing the whole way through! I sincerely love it so much! I hope that you see it through to the end!
Thank you for writing it!
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I wasn’t expecting much when I selected this. But this is really good, it’s sad that you don’t update anymore.

This story has made me in all my sick glory laugh so hard, shriek in happiness n feel sad n embarrassment in the past few hours. Thank you so much for this utterly amazing story, this made my day and I hope you continue! I hope there are more fanfics like this. Seriously you are such a hilarious person, you're writing is awesome!

Yes! This chapter I approve. Yup. I am so glad that if I had to end this fic the last chapter was the kiss scene. Whelp thanks for an interesting read, overall this was an enjoyable story to go through so thanks for sharing.

"You got hurt protecting me?" - this would be cute if it wasn't for the fact he was the reason she needed protecting in the first place. Also I was finally pleased that she realized her life was spiraling and took control however I was annoyed by Kakashi ignoring that. Relationships are built on respect and he doesn't respect her, what she thinks doesn't matter and he will just override her opinion when it comes down to it.

I know you explained why he did it but I can't buy it. Lots of civilians get with ninja and they are at risk but don't get special treatment. Taking her along on the mission tome is the height of stupidity as it puts every one at risk and her in even more danger. I mean I enjoy reading it but I don't buy it. I'm still suspicious over Ibiki's whole "she's not a civilian thing" and what with the exile remark at the beginning...I don't know it sounds more like she is being held prisoner.
I mean at first with her parents vanishing at the same time, I thought her parents were spies which is why she was under suspicion. Like they were spies who had a kid and weren't supposed to so like her whole life is a lie even if she doesn't know and is innocent. But then with her mother finally appearing well...bang went that theory so I don't get why she is getting this so called "special treatment".

The whole thing is cute in a warped way but I'd feel a lot warmer to this if it didn't feel like she was a toy being forced to go to their whims. At most she feels like their pet, team mascot and so forth. I get maybe your holding out on us so I'm hoping some answers will be given soon.

Somewhat exasperate at this point. I mean yey we got the cute hospital scene and the protag realized her feelings! On the other had... You basically encouraged Kakashi's controlling behavior by justifying it as they were attacked the moment they left the house, disbelief also arises due to the fact Konoha was so easily infiltrated, no one noticed enemy nin other than nin already seen, how did woman know to target Akiko, since her and Kakashi barely been in public together? I just, I want them to work out but the methods sometimes make me want to shake my head. Still wondering what happened to her so called helicopter parents, all the trouble she's been in and they just don't know, or why she's misses so much school and no one cares...eh all this said I am glad she knows her feelings now and hope to see it progress from here.