Beautiful, that's what this story is...

the only words i can find to describe it. Wish i found it earlier and not 6 years after it was completed. But hey at least i found it right?

OMG!OMG!OMG!

that was so AWESOME!

I thought it wouldn't be good because it wasn't from the harry/hermione/ron POV, but it was GREAT!

the muses smile on you!

keep writing!

AMime

Back to the drawing board: may I just say that for a very rare character pairing, this is by far one of the best fan fics I have EVER read. The characters were brilliant and refreshing. The character dynamics were too incredible, dialogue was mind-blowing, and as if that weren't too much, the plot line was ingenius. So, on behalf of all wanna-be writers and piddling readers out there, may I congratulate you on a story well-told.

-PyroSymptomsUnleashed

'Okay, okay! I take it back! Unfuck you!'

I laughed so hard things started coming out of my nose.

'You did. Now it's your turn to hide.'

I'm still resetting my ribs.

Just thought I'd leave another review. Which I never do. But you're amazing, so...I love the interaction between Professor McGonagall and Emma in this chapter. And Emma's general character. So sparks to you.

HOLY BARNACLES! I laughed. I cried. I may or may not have wet myself in the process of the former and latter. The point is; YOU ARE GOD! Yes; I'm blaspheming. (blasphemizing?) That's how awesome you are. I would risk god's wrath just to inform you: YOU ARE A GENIUS! Mastermind! Evil, perhaps, but awe-inspiring. I tip my proverbial hat to you. Clap. Clap.

-PyroSymptomsUnleashed

(see, I signed my whole name: you're special)

Aw that was so good. It also fueled my new found infatuation with Oliver Wood. Which is good. Well, to me, not to my friends who have to hear about it. *laughs evilly* Anyway this was really good and I hope to see more from you soon!

I love this story. It's absolutely brilliant! Please write more!

This story is great, nice, short , to the point, and puts u in a laughing mood. Hope u haven't given up on this story! Please write more!

Wow. My friend had just given me your story to The Invitation (that was great also) and I asked her where she got it and she pointed me to your way here at fanfiction. I love your stories! I read this one and didn't stop until I got to the end, it was amazing. God has given you a great gift (sorry if you don't believe in God) and you use it real well, I hope you keep writing, I look forward to more stories written by you.

Thanks for the entertainment,

Keisha

I cried reading this chapter!

Is it just me, or does this chapter sound different than the rest? Not in a bad way, nescesarily, but not quite congruent with the rest. I don't mind to sad, but I think it has more impact if you don't just state who died and how.

an excellent ending to your story. this ending, while sad, was very good. if you want to post the happier version as an alternate ending (ch 16) it would be cool to read.

No! -screams- You didn't just kill Gred and Forge! You didn't! You better put the other one up and keep them alive! Pwease? -begs- I'll love you forever, I swear.