This is a really good story! I love everything about it. Please finish this. You're almost done after all. Hope you'll continue writing this!

Oh c'mon we're almost done! I just love how you novelized the game itself and everything was in sync.. We just hope that you continue this. It's been a year and a half now. Please carry on! :)

I have gotten this far in the story and I am loving it. I am worried however that it has been almost a year and a half since your last update. Please tell me you plan to finish this. You have come too far to give up now.

This is good so far. A tad short, but good nonetheless.
Nice job with this chapter.

A very good start! You really did capture the essence of the video game. I like the addition extras you put in as well. I feel like the game could have done more of that too.
Anyway, good job with this first chapter.

Brilliant JOB. I love how you keep to the characters' personalities similar to the ones in the game. By the way Lulu was carried down the cables in Kimari's arms. If you pause the wedding crash scene where they slide down the cables you'll see it then.

WHAT?! But what happens next? I didn't complete the game as I had got fed up with the fight system by about your chapter 20-ish. Operation Mi'hen, I think.
Reading your novelisation has made me feel like wanting to play FFX again (i once read a novelization of a different game where I'd stopped about halfway through - it had made the game more enjoyable when I continued and, later on, finished it. If only I could get over my dislike of the FF fight system (I think I'll start again and use the items/moves a bit more wisely...)

...You cant just end it there! please say this story is going to be finished!1 please!

Think nothing of it. The small instances you placed in always spoke volumes of Tidus and Yuna's feelings for each other to me.

So... I'm guessing you had Yuna learn the Haste spell instead of Tidus?

Oh, you mean with Tidus attempting to pinpoint what Seymour was smelling? I liked that part, actually.

Say, I know I'm EXTREMELY late to be asking this, but exactly whay do you have Rikku fighting with knives instead of her clawed sleeve like in the game? Because it would take too long to ready it in real life?

Aw, man! You left out my favorite conversation in the game;

Barthello:I shook hands... with Sir Auron...

Dona:Oh please! Touch me with that hand and I'll remove it!

I LOVE your interpretations of Tidus' life in Zanarkand... well, Dream Zanarkand, really.

I see. But-and I'm sure some others reviewers may have pointed this out as well-Lulu has yet to display any direct black magic, so why did you refer to her as a black mage? I mean, she is one, but still...