Amazing. You portrayed Mulder and Scully' s mannerisms perfectly. Actually, they were even funnier because I had insight to their thoughts. It had a lot of innuendos and flirting without the sex, which kept me hanging for more. Truthfully, sometimes the "more" is a bit much unless there is some awkwardness involved. This was my favorite fan fiction by far.

that was a happy light-hearted romp, chuckled, giggled and at least one 'cover-my-mouth-laughing-like-a-lunatic'! Thanks!

This is one of the best X Files fics I've read, Mulder and Scully are perfectly written, I love your writing style and it goes so well with the theme of the show. 5 stars

The characterizations were spot on. I loved this story; it was hilarious.

I should start by saying that this review/favorite is many years overdue. Long before I even had a account (or even my own computer) I read this story and loved it. This is the most perfectly characterized X-Files fic I’ve ever read. This story feels so organic that I feel like I could watch “Detour” and expect the episode to unfold as it does here. You’re writing skills are top notch. I need to peruse the rest of your stories to see what I’ve missed over the years.

Wonderfull Storyline. Would have liekd a litte more moth men though.

(I don't feel like signing in, but) Just found this thanks to tumblr (which was literally YEARS from existance when this was published). This was great! I loved the M & S banter. I also found it a bit funny that a 2011 episode of Castle ripped you off on the whole hand-cuffed together thing; sweet!

I found this in the middle of the night by pure chance and had to practically force myself to stop reading after an hour (to get at least *some* sleep). I finished it the next day and it was absolutely brilliant!
Thank you so much for sharing! I had to laugh out loud at every second sentence... Loved Mulder and Scully's chemistry, could hear their voices in my head while I read it.
I'm not even sure if you're going to read this, but anyway, great job!

I admit, I found this story VERY late, but I am glad I found it. I loved every minute, and I especially loved funny Scully. I know she has a great sense of humour dying to be unleashed!

Love it :D

Great story!

That was the most charictor accuret X-files fan fic I've ever read. You got Mulder and Scullys wit just perfect. Even the way you described their reaction to one another was great! I could totally picture them saying and doing all that. 'raising his hand in perfect imitation of a second grader "I need to, uh, water the greenery"', That was soooo Mulder. I love that you include the little know fact of Mulders colour blindness.

Keep writing, keep posting, keep free of MSR.

And as always; Trust no one.

This story was seriously entertaining, and probably the best x-files fanfic I've read! And I've read a lot lately, lol. I'm skipping all the plot, syntax, whatever criticism because I don't have any. It was very engaging and I was sad to see it end. I see you wrote your x-files fics quite a while ago and have moved on to other things, but please, for my sake and others, consider going back and revisiting some x-files :)

Amaaazing. And so long! It must have taken you ages, and I for one thoroughly appreciate it ) I love the wittiness of it, and the in-character-ness - always a plus.

That was hilarious! I love it when M&S just get to be quirky and partnerish in fics!