All I did along reading this chapter was crying with joy so yeaaaaah wonders.

FINALLY BRUCE FOCUS ON YOUR DYING SON. Ugh bats will be always BATS jeez their selfless determination is the strongest focus that I ever faced.
If my pinky was hit by the edge of the door I will collapse with tears in days and they just roar like abnormal beings. Ahhhh wished that I got there supernatural force one day. I’ll accomplish a lot of things and work.

So teeeense woooooow

Haha guess that MacDonald fella had peed himself from the wrath of an angry DADDYBATS and weeeeee another killer in your heed Bruce.

Waaaaaaaa noooo your soooo meanie you let Alfie to cry. Oh god my eyes are burning me, and Dick you better fight back YOU HEAR ME Jay will never forgave you, COME BACK.

Poor Leslie and Alfred ... I don’t know what hell expressions will decorate he’s tiring face. Bruce come quickly your boy needs you.

Dickieeeeeeee noooooooooo keep fighting god damit oh and now I noticed that all the words are in bold.

Damn Bruce and your paranoid identity revealed ... just chill ... oh but he’s right someone will figure you guys so quick that way mmmmm then tell everyone that you and your family took martial arts in order to protect yourself or something. Think of Clark for example he’s only disguised by a think boring glasses lol.

Oooooh someone want Bruce to die mmmmm why I wonder?

Ooooooh interesting as those bats ugh just hug each other and say love you son and dad jeez lol.

Where's Tim?

AAAAAAAAARRRHHHHHHH AHAJASGSAUBSGUSGISGUNSB GUS GSU GUS IGA IG SIG JSB UGS IGUTIOBSIGBSGBUSGB this is one of the best things i have read in a lone time! Love it

Fantastic story! I loved every minute of it. From the first word to the last, I could not put it down! I love the father-son relationship between Dick and Bruce. Beyond excellent work!

Okay! So, some constructive criticism here, sort of- any way, they are a bit a bit, but batsy is too emotional ( I know for the plot and all, but just in general, for the other things, he does not get that worked up, just sayen) And ya made babs a bit to childish, she would have been sad, but a lot more calm and cool, she's been thro a lot and knows how to deal with it. Tim... I don't know much about, but I'm pretty sure he would have looked for facts, and then been quietly in pain. And his happyness would have been a LOT more reserved, he's been thro a lot as well, tho his inner thoughts n such pewter spot on. Alfred, was pretty good, but some thing was just... off. I don't know what it is, but he was too emotional? No, pushy. Yes he seemed pushy and distant. Not very... Alfred -y. I think Dickyboo was spot on tho! He seemed very good! The story over all was absolutely great and pulled me in adequately, just the smaller details were slightly off, that's all! Congrats! I don't think I'd do as well as you managed c:

Hmm. I wasn't expecting Harvey. I prob should have, but I didnt, I was thinking an oc, I guess. This is really good, man! I like it! When I don't have time to read it I'm thinking about it!

And still I wasn't smart enough to figure out it was two face. You doin ya job well, my friend.