beautiful story I hope you will continue

Errmm can't you make the name more obvious than ever...harrison evan..oh come on..can't you be more creative.

The story is really good. But can you the way you write it’s all together no paragraphs, and on the right side. Also the underline and thickness of the letters then switching to not gives anyone who reads it a headache.

How good of a writer can you be if you have not finished ONE story!?

I just read your fic and it's awesome
waiting for new chapter ...

"... you are a man of great strength of mind and body to take on such tasks of infinitesimal proportions."

To paraphrase Inigo Montoya of The Princess Bride:
Infinitesimal ... You keep using that word, I do not think it means what you think it means

Infinitesimal
(adjective)
: immeasurably or incalculably small
/an infinitesimal difference
: indefinitely or exceedingly small; minute
/ infinitesimal vessels in the circulatory system.
: immeasurably small; less than an assignable quantity
/ to an infinitesimal degree.

awesome work, can't wait to see people's reaction to who evans is

This is brilliant and hilarious and I love it

I forgot to complain about one thing. Harry is doing a TERRIBLE job of trying to be anonymous. Harrison Evans as his pen name. His name is Harry and is the son of an Evans. Come on! Then he reveals what classes he’s in?! Wow. Such anonniminity. The possible guesses on who this “mysterious” Harrison Evans is getting even SMALLER.

I guess it’s hard to did a writer who has both skill and intelligence on here. Blah.

I tried, but I’m out. I can only understand the hype in the reviews in the context of having a clearly skilled writer for once. But that’s it. Three chapters in and I’m bored to death. I highly recommend reading Poison Pen instead of this.

I don’t see what’s so interesting about this story so far. There’s nothing really profound or exciting at all in what Harry wrote and the everyone is drooling over it? I really don’t understand the hype in the reviews. To each their own, I guess.

I like your storie. I really want to know ir you are going to continuo the fic.
Sorry for my english ia am from spain

An exciting read so far!

Idiots all of them. And morally corrupt. It's like none of them realize that they don't have the right to dictate these children's personal life and jobs. Or how evil they sound in plotting to use and force said children to do what they want simply cuz it's what they want them to do. So good job on accurately displaying how disgusting the British wizarding world and Hogwarts adults are. Also while Harry's looking at those laws did he check to see if Dumbledore is legellay allowed to interfere with his life as much as he does?

For the love of Dobby DON'T bring in more people! The point is to be covert and unknown and secretive. You're already somewhat reckless by talking about it in public and dropping actual hints of who you are. Don't make it worse and easier to be found out by adding more people, people you wouldn't even know very well to trust as you do Hermione, into this plan of yours to be heard. That's like sabotaging yourself!