I've reread these two chapters so many times, and each time I do I'm entranced. You write so well for Otto and Rosie, and you've done great with their characterization. The only big suggestion I have is to find synounyms for the word 'dry'. Dry works, but ease up on it :)

I really hope you find time to work on this story some more; I would love to watch it progress, and I certainly enjoy it immernsly.

Hey! Wow, I love your story! It's GREAT -just like a really good novel. I usually don't like romances, but this is captivating! Awesome characterization of Otto and Rosie, and great setup! Although, was that Peter Parker that Otto bumped into at the start? I think Peter Parker would be a kid, maybe in elementary school, at the time Otto was in college. Awesome prequel to O and R's relationship - write more!

I can't express how... incredible this story is. The descriptions, the characterizations, the plot, the writting in general, all of it is brilliant. I am left in dire anticipation for the next chapter, and I can only hope that will be soon. We all know the final outcome and where Otto and Rosie's relationship is going, but your interpretation is (man, I can't think of adjectives) amazingly different, yet accurate enough that it follows what's "supposed to happen". No one could be dissapointed by this fic, only enchanted. Keep it up, Miss Kitty Kat!

This story is so beautiful. The depth and detail in it are amazing. And the subject is THE BEST :3 I would be happier than I am now if you would get chapter three up. :3

Wow! Those are amazing! Always what I've wanted to read about! You're an amazing author! Please please please keep writing, I'll always read them as long as there's more to read! :D I really have nothing to criticize here. You've captured the characters so well! Otto on a bike...now THAT would be something to see! Very awesome, and again, please keep writing!

-Maria

!THIS STORY IS FAN-FICCING TASTIC!

I LOVE IT! It is by far one of the best I have read in a long time. You are a great writer, please do not stop, I anxiously await the third chapter.

Oh, poor Otto... *glares at Rosie* Stupid blondie... Anyway, enough of my sulking, great story!

Yay! *applauds* I LOVE THIS STORY! It fits so perfectly... But... I'm gonna hafta agree with Otto on the whole "time" thing. I just don't get T.S. Elliot...

Great story! I hope it has more chapters! I really need some good background into these Characters! THANKS!

You've got a beautiful story here. Can't wait for you to finish it.

Ah, a perfect love story of two of my newest fave characters, Otto and Rosalee Octavius. I love how it's turning out so far, and can't wait for the third chapter! I almost wish Otto had his tentacles right now for his inevitable confrontation with "Blondie." But I digress, great story!

This is even better then the first chapter. I love this story almost as much as I love Otto.

~Otto Octavius Rules~

I really like this story, so I am going to read the next chapter to see how Otto fairs on a bike.

~Otto Octavius Rules~

I like the way this is goin' plez write more soon!

I love this story. It is my favorite. Otto Octavius my favorite charature. I refuse to call him Doc Ock. I cried when he died at the end of the movie.