This last chapter and all the other were great but leaving it unfinished at a cliffhanger like they is torture. Update?

The plot is interesting with many interesting and dramatic twists just like life throws at you; the characters all have unusual twists but they suit the story brilliantly. It's been four years since you updated this but I still hold hope regardless, please update as soon as all your writer's blocks and anything else you have going on has calmed down.

Please don't stop writing! I want to know what happens to SoraXRiku, Selphie, LeonXCloud!

When you way your going to redo the whole thing, does that mean all chapters will come out at once? It's been... like a year since you last posted a chapter. Too bad, it was getting interesting. I take that back I love it! Please do post a chapter soon! I waana see what's gonna happen next!

hey. i'm really digging this story. is it ever going to be updated? i really want to know what happents to poor sora! D:

Oh my gawd. HORRIBLE! That was a horrible place to end your chapter! I'm dying of wanting to know what's next! x(

I really really enjoy the story that you've been writing so far. It's so fun and dramatic and keeps me interested. The Cleon is very cute - one of the best I've read so far. With Riku and Sora, it's a bit frustrating to read about, but that's probably why I love it so much! lol I hope they get together soon.

Please, no matter what you do, continue this awesomely intriguing fanfic! It doesn't matter how long it takes you to update. This is just too good of a plot that you just can't quit on it, or your faithful fans. )

Good luck with updating! I'll be waiting for the next chapter anxiously! :D

I have really been enjoying this fic. Your characterizations sometimes feel a little OOC, and your pacing feels a little jerky, but you've also done some really interesting things with this piece. Your plot is really intricate, and character relationships have evolved and matured a lot, and in unexpected directions, over the last 18 chapters. I really loved the idea of them all making a KH movie! I know it's not really central to the plot, and there are more important things going on right now, but I hope this subplot gets some more of the limelight eventually.

I'm glad you've gotten interested in your own fics again; it's better to bring something to a firm conclusion than to just leave it hanging forever. (Not that I've followed this rule of thumb, but it's good advice nonetheless ...)

Good luck with re-writing and getting future chapters down on paper. If you ever want help with the re-writing process, let me know. I would definitely be willing to help - my editorial skills could use the exercise!

My gosh, is this story getting intense...

I rather liked this chapter, I feel you did a really great job despite how long it has been since you last updated. :D

Please keep up the amazing work, I love where this is all going. x]

WAS HOPING U WOULD HAVE LET RICKO BEAT THE SNOT OUT OF SORA IT WOULD HAVE BEEN DIFFRENT AT LEAST

DOMG you better update ULTRA soon PLEASE

I loved this. I stayed up until three in the morning, went to sleep for seven hours, and started again. Great story, please continue.

wow, you haven't updated for a long time. And i really liked this story. so much in fact that is still have hope that someday you may just update._

cause i really want to see riku and sora together._

welp! best wishes and luck to you, your writer's block's demise, and your computer stop being so big and bulky and mean.*pout*lol._

Oh...My...Fucking...God...This has to be one of the top stories about Kingdom Hearts (especially where one of the characters get abused) I love how it's nt all depressing, but not all fluffy. A nice balance of all genres _ Me likey! Update soon please!

This is so good... why won't you update? [

TT You haven't updated.

Have you abandoned the story for good?