The original is better

I'm liking this! I know it says completed but I do hope you continue! I want to read more!

Damn! Kate broke up with him? What has crawled up his ass and died? Gonna keep reading!

Nice beginning. Can't wait to see where this goes!

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i love this fic! pl3ase update ASAP!

it sounds like Dade dead on! we need more writers like you and stories like this for this movie!

please UPDATE!

So, does he ever get better? Can we expect any sequels?

Good Story overall, though.

I've been a fan of this movie sense i can remember. And I gotta say you nailed the personalities perfectly. Purely masterful. I want more, can't wait for the next chapter. Again masterful.

Dude, why is he so down. I was thinking about the back story and the only thhing that i could get was that MIT would learn about ZeRoCoOl. There is nothing else that i can think of. I'm telling you now. Finish this Fic. I will hunt you down. Or at least tell me why he is feeling to down.

Writing Style:

The narrative was great. I think that was probably the best I've read out there so far for Hackers Fanfiction. I do think that the dialogue at the begining was a little out of charraterr. But the conversation with the mother gave me flash-backs of the movies which is a great thing. Keep on writing it, though, You're good.

Awesome!

You got Dade's alias wrong. Its either Crash Override or Zero Cool... not Crash Zero.

This was actually pretty hard to read. You should work on your spacing. Maybe put in some descriptions and not just conversation. Hope that helps.