... they recruited three non fighters to fight naraku...

:( i was hoping shippo would get to go too

Too bad the training yusuke went through would have toughened her up quick. And why is she still wearing her school clothes to the past? I never really understood that in cannon either...

...damn it! How come she had to be weak! Urrrg well i ll just close my eyes and hope REAL hard that she learns damn fast.

The plot seemed interesting. It could have worked really well until Kagome was made into Yusukes female analogue and everyone became so OC as to be improable. Wantibg to mix up the couples is fine if it is done in a reasonable way. Using "because the author wants it" makes for terrible stories. There has to be GOOD reasoning worked out if you want people to take your fic seriously. I can no longer take this seriously. There is no preamble to the dissolution of Kagomes feelings for Inuyasha, there was no lead to the developement of feelings between Kagome and Yusuke and Kagome and gangs acceptance of Kikyo was unrealistic to say the least. And I was only 5 chapters in. I appreciate your attempt to write a compeling story but this falls flat fairly early. With a lot of reworking from a more mature angle this could be an amazing crossover.

SPIDER! Naraku has been reincarnated!

Hello derie it is a pleasure to meet you. Also I love your story's. They are postivly smashing.

Love how you made Kikyo turn out to be kind of cool with Kagome. She's not that bad haha.

the girl thing was cool!

very nice! but somebidy better tell kagome yukina has a psycho brother who is a little overprotective...

awesome

sweet

So...uh...whens the sequel coming out? it's been forever. oh and what did kagome whisper in shippou's ear?

I loved it!