Mr D.

Good job on this story.

hm needs to be updated but this has been a very good story so far

WHAT THE F*CK U BETTER NOT BE ABANDONING THIS STORY! BECAUSE I WILL BE MAKING ALOT OF PEOPLE DISAPPOINTED ME INCLUDED! SO GET OFF UR LAZY ASS AND FINISH THIS STORY DANMIT! WELL ANYWAYS GREAT CHAPTER I LOVE IT! THIS STORY IS SO WONDERFUL I REALLY LOVE IT AND ENJOY READING IT VERY MUCH! I'M A GIGANTIC FAN OF THIS STORY AND CANT WAIT TO READ WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! SO PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE I'M BEGGING U ON MY HANDS AND KNEES TO MAKE MORE CHAPTERS SOON! ( pwetty pwetty pwetty please? *puppy eyes*) I'LL BE WAITING VERY VERY VERY LONGINGLY! PLEASE DONT KEEP ME IN SUSPENCE LONG!

oh my goshness! this ws the first beyblade fan fic i read but i wasn't able to fav or anything! i've been searching for forever for this i am so glad i found it! i love this fic and fell in love with beyblade fanfiction after that.

two thumbs up!

Nice! This is the third story I read of yours and all the are great. Good Work!

Dr. D or Rei... P.S. Max's last name is Tate isn't it? You made up "Edwards" so I wasn't sure if you knew _. If you didn't then now you do, if you did then oh well.

interesting story.

really good so far, but Max's last name is Tate, Hilary Trabitha, and Kenny McCane,

a very great story so far, i can't wait to read the next chapter! so please update soon!

really good chapter, i'm so glad that u updated, plz update soon, plz update soon

hey. your story. i wrote that myself! and i would NEVER steal somebodys storie! how the fuck can you say that i did! somebody stole my story (actualy copy and pasted it) and i got really pissed. i promise you i havnt stolen your story. its just similar to yours. i wrote all of that myself, and i admit i got the idea from your one but its NOT exactly the same. this isnt fucking copying yours. i think your an increddible writer, an amazing writer (im not trying to rub up to you either, i'v noticed your spelling errors in several storys so your not THE BEST WRITER just a VERY good one thats got me inspired) if you want me to delete that story then i respect your wishes and will, but its not your story. i havnt copyed you. i also 'think it’s cowardly to steal another person’s ideas' and i DID NOT. so can you not say that i did, please. read over my story, its called run away, and i believe the story your writing isnt YAOI, mine is. and it doesnt involve KAIS GRANDFATHER (or does it? i dont think it does... sorry if it does) whic mine DOES. please write back to me because i am not going to stand for being accused of stealing your work.

( sorry if i have been rude in this review, i didnt mean to and i mean no offence to you if i sound rude. but im actualy really upset that somebody would say that)

- kai-luver-6

yeah!

you updated!

*throws a party*

keep up the great work!

and try to update fast?

cya!

Holy crap. I think I need to reread this fic, because I have NO IDEA what the hell was happening. Well, I know what happened in the chapter, but I don't remember the events that happened before the chapter. Make sense?

Good chapter though (although I was utterly confused). I can't wait for your new fic, too.

Oh, and for some reason, the beginning of this chapter reminded me of Inuyasha, and I thought I should let you know that it's over. I'm sad. It's gone forever, only to be seen in my memories. Actually, I didn't get to see last night's episode, so I don't for for sure if it was the last one, but I'm kinda sure it is. And my wrists are getting tired from typing (is that possible?), but yeah. Plus, I need to get back to my school work. I'm such a bad kid. :(

Oww...my hands.