| Reviews for Heartache Every Moment |
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   VST.BookCleverless chapter 1 . 5/14/2017 is he dead or alive |
| Celexs Draconia chapter 1 . 7/28/2010 That was a bit brutal to read, it was very well done. The emotional aspect was brought forward in a way that made it believable. Cel |
| entity.unknown chapter 1 . 4/8/2009 so sweet :] |
| lurv2boogie chapter 1 . 11/10/2006 Nice to see someone who has a good grip on dialogue. I've read far too many fics where you read it and people just wouldn't say what they're being written as saying - so it's great that you've got plausibility to your situations and dialogue. Also, I have to say I'm not an HHr shipper, but I read this because it was recommended to me by a friend who LIVES for HHr moments (and gets extraordinarily fierce (sulky) about my H/G writing) and I'm glad I did! It's a good oneshot format as well, and rounds off nicely at the end. Good juxtaposition of finality and airiness at the end (I'm not quite sure how that works, but it does... if you have no clue as to what I'm talking about, feel free to PM and I'll do my best to explain further). Great stuff! |
| Monkeystarz chapter 1 . 2/4/2006 he went to meet his destiny while holding a hanky. what a manly way to go. woot woot. loved this one too i'll add to my distration posts and tellu this was an enjoyable distraction as well. |
| chantal-j.t chapter 1 . 2/12/2005 All your stories rock! I particularily love this one...Of course i never complain about something that can make me cry (because its well written..i can get in touch with the characters) so keep writing and ...well WOW! |
| creepy susie chapter 1 . 12/5/2004 how is that the end of hte story? I want to know if he comes back! Of course who am i to talk i love this story keep writing! |
| jess chapter 1 . 11/2/2004 beatiful it made me cry ohh i beg of you write a 2 chapter thanks love it on a scale of 1 to 10 i give it 10 jess |
| Elphaba-Rose chapter 1 . 8/23/2004 OMG! This is so sad but so sweet! Poor Harry! I want to know what happens! I understand doing a sequel is almost impossible because of the way you ended it,which was very VERY well done. I love it. This is the second fic of yours I've read, and I'm probably going to read more,you're one of the best writers I have ever seen. |
| Granger-gurl-rox chapter 1 . 7/14/2004 Once again an excellent story, so sweet! I didn't cry, I held it in :) but its definately one for the tear jearkers! I love your style of writing and Harry and Hermione all the way of course! lol Excellent ~Claire~ |
| Dead chapter 1 . 7/11/2004 Very well written! I would probably be crying if I could. Keep writing! I'll be looking out for a new chapter! |
| sally chapter 1 . 7/9/2004 Excellent chapter! Luv the way you discribed the emotions! Keep it up! |
| ghoulified chapter 1 . 7/8/2004 *is trying not to cry* ... *is crying alot* Oh, dear...that waqs truely amazing and beutiful. Oh, my...goodness! Sparrow |
| momisa chapter 1 . 7/8/2004 Is this the only chapter? is it like a short fic type thing or not? cos.. this is so good.. well mebbe cos this is like the first time i actually read the harry potter one.. i usually read the marauders time period stories.. but this one is so sad but so cute a the same time... I cried!.. and then i smiled... well this is a job well done..good job mate... :) |
| Ecstace chapter 1 . 7/8/2004 Aw. That was really, it almost made me cry. Great job. I know you said one-shot, but you should really think about expanding it. |
