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More, please!

Right now James needs to be put through the worst
He'll lily can think of along with lots of fire and brimstone
Really burning hot he's a fake which irritates me though
I absolutely adore your exceptionally brilliant writing
It's incredibly outstanding,no I haven't read the previous version and yes I really prefer this one
Although James is getting things to easily so far and
I'd like to see him work harder to earn Lily's love and
She needs to stop being a pushover she's a redhead
He should prove himself by going through a trial by
Red hot fire,I can wait for ages for the updates ad I
Don't give up on potter stories ever and this one is
Becoming exceedingly popular in every way imaginable
So I'll wait until the next chapter comes up I'm positive
That it will be another outstandingly tremendous
Chapter thank you very my love Elizabeth
Skinner from Australia.

I think lily gave in to James way to soon he's nothing
But a lousy liar and a layabout whom uses stupid young
Witches like they're tissues and when he messes up he
Had better start praying as she will come out as a
Gorgeous redhead with hopefully revenge on her mind
And curse him and Sirius to kingdom come in other
Words could you please have lily act more like a fiery
Redhead than she is right now she's way to gullible
And stupid he needs such a major ally cruel wake up
Call though it's a shame there's only one more chapter
As this magnificent snappy smart exciting love story
With a moral if I know lily could go on for more chapters
As James won't have learnt his lesson in only four
Fascinating sensationally wonderful chapters so could
You please consider writing more chapters and some
Juicy revenge slash fluffy ones also thank you very
skinner

I've always known that James was a bully at hog warts
Yet now he's also a cheat as well just because Kate's
A dumb blonde no insult intended whom is jealous
Of lily still I'm enjoying this very special love story
Even though I hope that lily teaches James a hard
Lesson in how to treat people with true respect and
Consideration not simply because they look beddable
To him she's a redhead don't get on her bad side we
Have very long memories question though
Why has it been edited at all most of your reviewers
Would be okay with the way it was meant to be so
Please never feel you have to tone it down as they're
Teenagers whom speak their minds if Sirius has one
I'm still not sure as he's come across as a sexist pig
Most times plus an atrocious truly
Found a unique style to this marvellously great
Interesting love story which has had fans enchanted
For a very long time as it has resonated with a touch
Of magic realisism so much hilarity and fun plus
Exceptional sensitivity heaven help James if he ever
Mistreats lily he won't be forgiven easily by her or by
Remus either he needs to beware of redheads yet
Thank you for this exquisitely delightful story full
Of magical times skinner.

This is exceedingly a different take on their unique
Love story and I'm loving every word it's incredibly
Wonderful although Sirius does t paint himself in a
Good light but then he was nothing but a bully without
Any manners as any wizard could've seen Lily's true
Beauty behind her mask James did plus there are no
Errors in your spelling or grammar both are perfect
Actually besides this magnificent awe inspiring story
Is utterly fascinating and these two wizards will find
Out you don't judge a witch by how she looks or
A fiery red haired lily will cause them excruciating pain
With one nasty hex from her powerful wand that sounds
Brilliant I canhardly wait after is in the eye
Of the beholder your such an imaginative storyteller
With a wicked sense of humour that's infectious as
Anything the marauders could dish out yet thoroughly
Exciting to read while being engrossed in this delightful
Gripping tale about love and redemption for two silly
Marauders I'm going to definitely enjoy this story and
Laugh myself silly thank you. Very
Skinner.

please finish this

3.1 year
4.I don't think thus is valid because you last updated this story in 2008 so... but as often as possible.

Please update

did you mean thick instead of think at the beginning?

Please update

Whoa whoa whoa. Please finish this story!

Hi! I really like the idea behind this story so far, and I do wish they weren't "false pretenses" as you said. I have not read the previous version, sorry, I generally wait about a month, maybe not that long, and I think that it would be great if you updated once a week or every 2 weeks, something like that. So yeah. Love the story so far! :)

It has been 8 FLIPPING YEARS! Can you PLEASE bloody write the end?

PLEASE WRITE!