Very cute in the manner and spirit of their relationship ;-)

Jack is super funny. And when he said Daniel would take him, I laughed so hard, Daniel and Shanahan in a fight! You should write a sequel.

Nicely done. I think you have a good sense of the characters.

Ah, if only. Would have been much nicer than the catastrophy that was the engagement with Pete. Ugh.

you should right a sequal.

What a fun story. :) Some good old-fashioned S/J angst. I kinda miss the good ol' days when I wasn't angry with the way the show was written.

Are you even into Sg-1 anymore?

I'd love a sequel as you are week in the face of bouling. :)

Lovely fic and I'm in awe that you would even ATTEMPT to write a fic in half an hour. I think I'm doing well if I can write 10 words in a day, then it'll take me a week to polish and refine before I post. And I'm still self-critical when I read them after they're posted!

Anyway, I digress. I'd love to see a bowling chapter. Something about the visual of Teal'c in bowling shoes just does it for me.

Great story, very funny. And everyone knows O'Neill's just a big softie! Great advice from Janet though!

aww that was sweet )

Aw...this was darn cute, too. Love protective-sort of jealous-Jack. lol the occasional side note about Daniel going nuts about the masks, and the bit about how Carter's either healthy or in the infirmary for a week from blunt head trauma. lol...you've really got a way with words.

-sil

I really like the thought of Jack as chief comforter of the recently dumped! lol! I like the way you played this out, staying true to the characters in the show and leaving it UST. Really enjoyed reading it. :)

You should make a sequel! It's begging to be written. Don't you hear it? "write me... WRITE ME!" wahahahahaha! Oops, nm thats my muse (C:

lol! That was SO good! I was cracking up at the part where Janet gave her tips for "comforting the fairer sex". That was hysterical!

Hello Little Red.

Your the first person that I've felt moved to review. (You're all so young) Anyway 'Tuesday' was a really good effort. The characterisations were spot on, even Sam was good, (not many people manage to get her down very well.)

Write more SG1 fic, try something longer, you're good at it and blimey, this fandom needs some good writers.

Regards

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love it. Especially when he just brings up the bowling to teal'c. And his 'teal's and i could kill him' line.