please go on! it took me a chapter to get into the story, but now i really want to know how it ends.

What happens next?

dude, update. honestly. that was a horrible place to end it. how long has it been, a year? sweet gods above, update! i beg you!

Why did you stop updating? This is such a good story. I wish there was more of it. Please update soon. This is one of my favorite Peter Pan fics.

Oh wow - now that's a twist I never expected. Please do carry on, I can't wait to read more, fantastic job so far!

OMG! Please tell me you will update like tomorrow! You can't just leave a huge cliffhanger like that! I need more! More very existence depends on it! Please update!

Oh my...that was something I did not expect lol

I look forward to another chapter...hopefully soon!

wow! awesome story. please update soon :)

gosh...gosh...GOSH! hook? u stopped at such an exciting point! hook? wer does hook come in? i really want a happy ending...plz gimme one! but u rock...and maybe u could put in a scene wen richard and wendy are in bed...hes just about to take her...an pete comes to her rescue! plz write more!

please update soon!

omg so it is hooks fault! aww the baby is peters!please continue you have no idea how brilliant this story is. it is myfave please continue

I love this fic! Please update ASAP!

eep! this is really good! fantastic plot twist :)

update as soon as possible please

Oh, what a cliff hanger! You simply must continue! It's a good read. And I would like very much to find out what happens next.

I like it, I have yet to find anything that needs change, but I will let you know if I should find something. Please update soon.