Love it

that explains a lot...I guess. A. Lot.
I like this story. even if it's not finished, I really do like it.
Yeah.

I was just rereading this story, and I realized I never reviewed it...which is weird, but anyway...

This is undoubtedly one of the most original and well-written fics i've read...despite the whole not finished part of it.

The way you write is just very unique..the disjointed and half-finished sentences, the italicizing, the dreams...and it just makes reading your story even better.

I loved the emotion and realism of their often awkward and argumentative relationship. Definitely the best high school fic i've read.

The ending was very poignant and fitting...again despite the unfinished-ness :p

You are an awesome writer.

O.O They had SEX? Where was I when that happened? Darn it, everything is so VAGUE in this story...

. What was the deal with that older man's odd behavior?

I love the way you write. It's almost like it's poetry! this is a great story!

I wished you still did this thing. You were awesome at it.

Oh, this chapter was so awesome. I loved it. Funny.

wat goin to happened plez continue

i would expect naruto to make a show of it - once the pants are half off, whats a little strip tease between a boy and his audience? XD

nice beginning!

...this is good but confusing!

cool

very pretty writing

So, you are going to continue this?

Wow. You have an absolutly GREAT fic going on here! And the fact that you're been to a Japanese school on an exchange program makes the entire story worth waiting for. There's so much I want to ask you, but I'm a tad bit too lazy to ask xD So, please keep up the great work. I'll be waiting for the next chapter. -

please continue! The story is exceedingly good! And the grammer is too. There are so few good stories out there! So please keep writing!