I was enjoying the story (yes I realize this is old and you probably don't even check this) and while I have a difference of opinion on abortion than what was stated in chapter 10, the uneducated opinions and blatant lies (marijuana is addictive despite there being studies done that prove it has no symptoms of withdrawal and impossible to overdose one, and the fact you said a fetus can feel pain at 8 days old despite their Neurological systems not becoming fully developed until after 21 weeks, which means they are unable to feel any pain or have any knowledge or memory of what's happening as they lack the neuropathways that require this), it ruined my wanting to continue. Also, as people usually express their personal views upon their characters, as a victim of sexual assault myself, you have no idea what it's like to go through that so don't you ever suggest we are terrible people for not wanting any more of our attackers DNA anywhere near us. It was a giant slap in the face and honestly I don't know where you get off pretending to explain that to people even in a fictional setting. I don't have to agree with you and vice versa. I even respect differing opinions but unfortunately yours went above just being a differing opinion and it's disappointing. I won't be reading any more, not that you really care. Just figured I'd give you a differing opinion and actual factual information.

A lot of opinions about controversial topics. Threw me off.

Something tells me there's gonna be some heavy drama when she finds out about his job and why he started talking to her.

this will probably be the only comment you get on this chapter but you might be able to get addicted to marijuana but you cannot die from it unless you ingest over a pound of it learn your facts otherwise your story is pretty damn good get your facts right

Enjoying the story! :)

Just thought I'd drop a quick note (since I haven't seen other reviewers mention it) that there isn't a gas pedal on a motorcyle, and it would therefore be impossible for Kagome to just steer the bike without also giving it gas. Some motorcyle 101: because the throttle is found on the right handgrip, you twist your hand back to give it gas. The only things you do with your feet are shifting gears (after you've pulled in the clutch on the handlebars) and sometimes brake. It seems theoretically possible that she could be sitting in front of him with her hands and feet on top of his, and that his half demon balance and strength would be sufficient to keep them upright and moving forward, but it would definitely be incredibly awkward and not super romantic, IMO.

My dad taught me out in a field on a dirt bike when I was 13, because it's always fairly hard to control the bike when you're first learning and you fall over a lot. He also had to explain all the mechanics to me before I actually got on the bike; there's very little teaching you can do "on the fly" because of the difficulty of learning to balance with another person on the back and the inability of anyone else to control only part of the machine. It's not exactly like with a car where you can just reach over and grab the wheel while someone else works the pedals. I've personally found that the best way to learn is in stages: first you learn how to start the bike and control the throttle and the hand/foot brakes, then slowly you figure out how to shift gears and use the clutch (on the left handgrip) without the engine dying on you, then you can focus more on balance and turns, and then maybe after you get all those things down, you can learn to balance with another person on the back.

I realize it's been over ten years since the story was updated and this is probably way more detailed than you care about, but I just felt compelled to offer this little detail since I see a lot of fanfiction authors overlook it. This is just one of those moments when my personal experience gets in the way of me enjoying a romantic detail of a fic. I really am enjoying the story and am looking forward to what happens next!

Aww man, this story is so epic!

It was cute up until the Naraku thing. It didn't necessarily need to be there.

Loved it so much!

i like this story! My favourite bits were the radio show bits with Inuyasha and Miroku :)

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This story is fantastic! I enjoyed everything! So glad you chose to share it, Thank You.

This was awesome! Thanks for writing it. I'm really happy they didn't fall in love right off the bat. It was a good change to most of what I read. ;) good luck in your future works!

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! I LOVEEEE LOVE LOVE IT! :D

Aww man! I'm kind of disappointed. The ending here has closure but there's still some open-ended questions that I would have liked answered. I see that you have started a "sequel" but it doesn't look like it will be completed any time soon! (

Otherwise I truly enjoyed this story! It was fun to see Inuyasha and Kagome bicker and slowly fall in love. You had a really nice progression with that. I would love to read more of your work. Best of luck in the future!