| Reviews for Uncharted Territory |
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   Robin Raephe chapter 2 . 1/17/2009 You catch perfectly the manerisms of Brian (you are top-notch there, actually), but you make Brian never ever consider again Angela and I miss that as a reader. I think, being so analitical as he is, that he would be caught up between them. I am also doubtfull Brian is into girls all that much, I mean, just for the sake of being. |
| xXsweetyxX chapter 2 . 9/7/2006 hey this story sounds really awesome u should have where she starts to tlike him to and they kiss! well i really like ur story and i think u should really think about wrting a few more chapters cause this story could be really awesome! lol |
| freddykre chapter 2 . 1/23/2005 this story is great, brian is TOTALLY in character and he talks like he usually does. the only thing is that you should cut down on saying "...i mean" like "having them staying over, i mean" other than that its great and you should writhe more soon...really soon. write more, i mean. lol good job. |
| Jakalope chapter 1 . 1/20/2005 wow, this is truely amazing and I loved it. Brian has always been a mysterious kind of figure in the show. you never really know what he is thinking and after the episode where he tells Angela that he wrote the letter, I was left wondering and such. Loved the story. Keep up the good work. |
| Aesthetic Angel chapter 2 . 12/25/2004 Wow! For not knowing who the character is, I really like the story so far. You should really become 'unlazy' and whatever...and work on the story. *Laughs* Just keep those chapters coming (Once a month, hm?) and you'll get a bigger fanbase! I'll be reading along as well (Maybe I should watch a bit of the show?)...so, hopefully you continue! So... Like, whatever... Keep up the good work and update once in a while! *Harasses at school* Bye~! |
| Mistress Hershey chapter 2 . 10/25/2004 I really like this story, and I hope that you will continue. |
| unknown chapter 1 . 10/14/2004 I really like this story. Please Continue! |
| Stormbringer91 chapter 2 . 8/2/2004 Is that it? :looks around: Wheres the rest? THERES NO MORE! Argh, darn you. Please up date soon, it's getting very good! I need to know what happens next! |
| unbroken-candy-bar chapter 2 . 7/22/2004 you are doing pretty good, but one thing is really getting to me. you use like and whatever too much. Brian Krakow is like...smart or whatever. Its like...crazy that you make him sound like...he is kinda stupid. I know guys dont have complete thoughts when they are thinking but they like...dont use that many likes or whaevers...or whatever. please work on it a little, or a lot. but i really like your story. it almost has a plot. unbroken |
| scatterbrain chapter 1 . 7/21/2004 okay... you do brain really well but you need to lighten up on the "like's" and the "whatevers" other wise it was awsome :D |
| keeponwritin chapter 2 . 7/20/2004 Hahah, Crackow. I'm enjoying this fully, you so have Brian. Continue on. |
| Morgan chapter 2 . 7/19/2004 Aww.. how CUTE! I luff Brian. I'm so glad you're writing a fan fiction about him. He's such a doll. X3 -looks evily at Melissa and tackles Brian- MINE! Noone takes away my snuggly Brian. |
| anonymous chapter 2 . 7/16/2004 Really good so far, I hope you keep updating |
| cyclist chapter 1 . 7/8/2004 This is one of the best stories on this site. Please update soon! |
| Nicole Lo chapter 1 . 7/8/2004 Continue. You've got the whole jargon thing accurate with all the "whatevers" and "likes." I like it so far. |
