Aww I read all of you stories and I loved them all. They are so good. Your such a good writer. Keep writing it’s so good

great story! it was kind of sad too. Reading stories about the cell games are always so depressing because we know the final outcome. goku dies and refuses to be wished back.

u are an amazing writer ... keep up the good work... this is my 10th time reading and still not satisfied:)

I love it. My favorite character. You created a great emotional roller coasters that links their feelings. Great work.

Wow, this is everything I'd ever wanted and more. You did it! You wrote Goku the way I'd always wanted to see. This is truly incredible. My chest is actually aching right now. Thank you, truly, for creating this wonderful story.

It may be because I am only 10 but I kinda had a hard time understanding which parts were flashbacks and which ones were not!

I don't know why I couldn't get enough of your writing. The way you portray them it just right. I could totally imagine them acting like that to bad we couldn't see in the anime. I know I'm way to late for commenting this but I just have say it. You did a really good job I hope you still continue writing Gochi hoping more towards Dragonball Super since in super the moments are not many but they do make a great slice of life moments. Cheers
Have great day and thank you for the fanfic :D

Brilliant way to end this. I absolutely loved reading your fic. All the emotions and romance were terrific, honest and heartfelt.

btw i'm sorry i finished first all of the chapters before making a review, sorry i posted it on the first chapter

one of the best GoChi I have read. Thank you so much and I hope for more GoChi stories!

Awesome story. Please make a sequel. Like this was the best fanfiction/story I have ever read.

I've read the whole story, and man: you got the talent.

I loved everything, and I'm glad you focused on Goku and Chichi, they're just so sweet, pure and true, as a married couple.

They're my OPT (One True Pairing) in Dragon Ball.

Keep on writing, I haven't seen your other stories, but I really enjoyed this one.

Oh you have no idea how much I loved this fanfic! I enjoyed your writing so very much, and your portrayal of Goku and Chichi's relationship was so spot on, I actually squealed in delight lol! The fact that none of the characters in your story seemed OOC was awesome, because, (similar to what you said) I've read other fan fictions about GoChi, and often times Chichi would come off as this overprotective, nagging mother that only cared about her son's education, but when you took more time to observe her, it's evident that ChiChi loves and cares about her family a whole lot. Whew, that was a pretty long review (for me lol) but I just wanted to get my point across on how touching your fanfic was :) You're doing an amazing job with writing, please keep up the great work!

I almost cried. After I read this I had to remind myself over and over again that Goku had been brought back to life by Old Kai and there's DB Super already and he's already achieved Super Saiyan God Super Saiyan just for me not to feel sad once more. Whenever I read about Goku's death in the Cell Games along with how he spent the nine days with his family, it always makes me feel sad.

You know, I am nit usually moved over by such stories but this one is really dramatic. It was wonderfully written, considering that I am not a G/CC fan but I loved it. I'm almost crying as I read it, especially when I got to the part of Goku sacrificing himself to save the Earth once more. That was the saddest part of the Cell Games, really. As I read that part I was just hugging my Goku pillow and I wanted to cry, really. I do not like Chichi but I could understand her situation and her pains, and just imagine the agony she went through as she thought of all her last moments with Goku. It's relaly heartbreaking, I know because it's also the same as when you break up with the one you love most. Especially when she found out about Goten. It's not easy to raise a child without your significant other/husband by your side, I know because I am a single mother as well, the only difference is my dickhead of a husband left us for another girl and started a new family with her, unlike Goku who did something noble which is the reason why he was forced to leave his family. That's why when somebody says Goku is a bad father I do not agree at all, because I have seen someone who is probably the worst father that anyone could have, it's too unfortunate that my child was unlucky enough to have that person for a father.