It makes zero sense for harry to have bruises in the hospital wing if he didn't have any in Dumbledores office. He removed the appearance charm BEFORE he called Snape and Remus went to get sirius. So if all these bruises were visible cause the charm was broken, they'd all have seen them then. Also, and this is just a personal opinion, it really sucks that Harry feels sad and hurt etc by snapes attitude when by all accounts Harry hates Snape too! I can tell you from experience, just finding out that someone is related to you DOEZ NOT

Thanks for another enjoyable chapter

I Admit, funny joke at the end. Well done

This just made my heart hurt

That was rather heartbreaking, thanks for the chapter

Pretty good character building, looking forward to the rest of the story

Thanks for another very enjoyable chapter

Talk about a shocker, get run over by a gram and find out your godfather is alive, or your dog father LOL

Really curious to see how things will develop, pretty good story so far

Enlightening chapter to be sure

I love your story and your creativity

Hey! Where are you? You said that you wouldn't abandon a story...

I've read through chapter 32 now, and I'm disappointed that McGonagall got away with announcing that his mother's last name is Evans and no one bit on it. I thought for sure this was going to lead to an unexpected conflict, especially since she was originally unaware of Darian's true parentage.

It was amazing up until Snape was discovered to be Harry's father. ;-;

I recently discovered your stories. You write very well.
I wish you decided to continue.
Hope you update soon! :)