Can we have more focus on James and Lily? I don't care about Monica.

continue...

Em. I never thought she could be such a bloody devious little thing! She should've learned from the Lily thing.

I smell jealousy in the air!

omg. just wow! i absolutely love this fanfic! pls pls pls write the sequel soon! ima just keep on checking to c if uve started it! just one request can we hv more lily n james drama pls? thnx n keep up the great work! u dunno who xxx

This chapter was horrible to read, we know what just happened, you could've just mentioned the scenes instead of copy and pasting them, waste of a chapter in what is usally a brilliant thought out piece of work

LOVE the story! Currently watching Friends, the one where Phoebe dates the diplomat and Ross sleeps with Chloe. Best show ever (tied with NCIS and Merlin)!

i didn't really get the flash backs...i thought it was really confusing.i really enjoyed the end of this chapter though

oh my god this story is so good :)

liked the idea, but thought james and lily were OOC

i think they both should be a lot more mature than your story makes out,

and James' feelings are a lot deeper than what they seem to be in the story

I have read this about 6 times, because good Lily/James beach stories are so rare, I've seen more dodo birds. And I don't mean in pictures, either. Congrats on your awesome work. Why am I reviewing at chapter 9? Because I was too lazy to review at chapter 1 or at the end. So a vague, inaccurate sense of the middle was what I chose. I applaud thee, Miss Elladore. Bravo, bravo! *golf claps* :{D

THIS IS AWESOME! I LOVED IT! its not stupid and all abt crap but actually has a plot and stuff. its sooo good.

Please write a sequel!:)!

I love friends too, Chandler's my favorite:)

Great chapter!

I'll check out the sequel, well if you wrote it! Loved the story, it was really cute! Oh, and could you tell me some good books to read, because you've read a lot of books that I like too.