great story, love it!

AI ELBERETH! I feel like one of the elflings but I KNOW what happened.

I like how you say you "disrupted their lives"

Oh noooooo!

I'm rereading this ( I was Skittles). And I love this story so much! How old are you?!

I really like your story! I could never write one as well as you!

I think its good so far and the genre would be called fan-fiction I believe

2 things-
1. I think the characters would probably use the word 'elleth' instead of 'girl'
2. Is 'Linnor' a feminine name? I know that 'Linnoreth' or 'Linnoriel' would be, but am not sure about 'Linnor'

Just wanted to ask about the names... For one thing, Ivana OAKENSHIELD? And also, what would the rest of Enanya's name be? Had she not been an elf I would have assumed she was Enanya Azverlet, but for elves 'Azverlet' would be a name given specifically to Ananya because it describes some characteristic of her; therefore Enanya would not have shared that name (for example, Arwen Undomiel- 'Undomiel' was a name meaning Evenstar given to her as she was the Evenstar of her people; she did not share it with her mother, father, or brothers)

Don't believe 72 children would keep such a secret. However, I enjoyed the story very much.

First story you've ever written? Are you POSITIVE? I'd say this is REALLY good for a first story. It's already got my laughing so hard my brother's giving me weird looks. :)

Good start, I didn't think I would like this but I'm glad I gave it a shot.

i love it can't wait to read the 2nd one!

alredy cn tht movie an ur rite bout indian movies not showind brits in a gd lite! an ur rite saris r anoyin 2 wear!

my cuzins on my dads side used 2 live in mumbai an now they liv in bangalore.i went 2 c the recently an ur rite there are mor cows buffalos on th streets than wot i remember of mumbai