Lol! That was hilarious! Awesome nailed their personalities.

That was lots of fun :) Luke backtracking physically and stumbling verbally was spot on.

Nice! I like how Luke realized his error and was backpedaling.

He he, not very likely of happening, but funny. ;)

And appearently some people do enjoy sleeping in those things.

Love Lora

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!LOLOLOL0LOLOL!I LOVED THAT IT WAS SOO FUNNY! great job! :)

Ah ah :) very funny :) and I can just imagine them at the end ;P So her underwear were the key to her heart, huh ;P cute ;P

Great job :) Hope there are more pieces like this one :)

Love

Mireille X

Funny very funny

Hehehehehehe...

*cackles*

I'm getting to like Mara more and more.

:D

LOL!

Will she model the Tankinis for him? ;)

*LOL*

Ah, that was /so/ funny! Very nice & I like Han's reaction! ~_

"Okay, see, I didn't really- What I mean to say is- You turned, and I was there, and you weren't supposed- Not that it was your fault, because it wasn't. It was my . . . . " Luke trailed off, having backed into the wall of the turbolift.

Ah, this also made me smile

He quickly backtracked. "Nah, forget it. Talking's bad. Very, very bad. I personally can't see how people handle it. All that communicating really puts a damper on my day, and—"

XD! Ah, that made me smile so.

*Sniggers*

Luke seemed OOC, but it was hilarious anyway. My absoulute favorite part was about turbolift music. Awesome.

yeah right gonna update soon, it's been a few months since I last read this exact chapter, so you better hurry up and update soon.

just so you know, i think it would be quit funny if their just happen to be a sleep over and luke just we might say "accidently" stops by and sees mara in her p.j's.