I love this story please continue. And can you do where catelyn became strong and proves them wring even rob also and get married become mother and a queen.

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I AM at loss of words. Wonderfully written&on top of that a truly haunting piece of work, showing the depths of those characters and moving as well. WOAH.

WOW, What a moving piece. In my mind I see more simmilaters in Joffery and Sandor relationship . I like how you pointed out that you don’t have to be a bully just by using fist but words can do as much damage as fist or swords. In the end I think Robb is the true monster since he took advantage of his sister who didn’t know any better .I got a little choked up reading this .

Wow! What a story. To think I almost bypassed this story because I wasn't interested in their kids. But I read and had tears finding out the fate of poor Cat. I'm glad you wrote about why Robb did what he and it made sense. Kudos to you.

This is amazing, and heartbreaking. It seems reminiscent of GRRM somehow, just because things go so WRONG, and I felt hurt reading along the whole time because it could've gone differently, and each character had so many layers. Wow. I loved Cat and it hurt so badly when she died. This is wonderful.

I'm very sorry to tell you such things, but in this fic Sandor is too emo, too afraid of his own daughter and too tamed for me.

About maid Catelyn - poor thing, she also had brain tumor.(This is often the case of extreme height) And, by the way, Ser Mountain has pure, clear,full-blown epileptic temperament. He is a man. Catelyn is not! She is a woman! If the woman has pure, clear,full-blown epileptic temperament, she isn't so agressive, she is more like to be whore without any resistances or thief without any resistances, or complete drunk. And why you wrote that she is smarter than her uncle, and than Catelyn drown herslef in the lake? This is not smart, this is very stupid. Gregor would kill the offender.

To soothe your anger - your punctuation is brilliant!

it has been a long time since a story made me cry. THis oe did. Pain and rage, and excellent characterization. Only criticism I have is that the language seems too "modern" at times, but even that is not a major concern

Excelent job.

I was completely drawn into this story. I love it. As much as I dislike the idea of Sandor and Sansa, you made reading it worthwhile. You did an excellent job at portraying Sandor, and Robb was SO well written! I hated him until I realized that he feared Cat. Then that hatred sort of dulled to a mild disgust. I still don't like him, but at least I understand him now. You do such a marvelous job of creating characters that interact realistically and believably. Nuff said, I'm out.

I love this so much. Thank you.

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OMGWTF I AM GOING TO SHOOT THIS 'timmy' PERSON!

Well, actually, I'm not. But if he/she/it/they had left his/her/its/their email I'd send him/her/it/them something nasty. Please, pay no heed to this 'timmy' thing. I really hate it when people do that.

Anyway, another heart-rending little jewel. You do this really, really, really well. Don't let anyone tell you differently.

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