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Under it all chapter 3 . 11/4/2004 Please go on! Don't stop! I really like this story for a couple of months I was like, "Can't wait for the next chapter!" and now there is. Your story does not suck. I like it enough to read over it alot, so please don't stop writing! (For most of the revire I was telling you not to stop writing this story, gets annyoing?) Anyway, I like it with Robin when he thinks that Raven is a treat. And that cliffhanger will make me REALLY want to read the next chapter. Anyway you are a really good writer, I like your works (even if I have only seen one ::laughs::) You better have a next chapter cuz I like this story do much! Have fun writing. †Sonya PS- What do you want to be when you grow up? I mean your a really good writer. :) |
MirandaOtto chapter 3 . 9/29/2004 Robin is such a multi-persanilty person, ain't he? I mean, first ha is all musshy towadrs Starfire then he's all hatred towards Raven. I can't wait to see what happens next! |
WildSpiritOfDarkness2 chapter 3 . 9/27/2004 OK, lemme see if i got this straight. Raven hurts Robin, Robin finds Starfire, Strafire says nothing about the HIVE, Robin thinks Raven hurt Strafire, Beastboy gets killed dead by...jinx?, Cyborg attacked by Gizmo, Raven fighting with Jinx. Wow, a lot to remember! good job! |
RobinLover chapter 1 . 9/4/2004 I need chapter 3 A.S.A.P.! A.S.A.P.! AND ONE LAST TIME! A.S.A.P.! |
RobinLover chapter 2 . 9/4/2004 I loved this! Hey...is Robin okay? I need to know! |
Lain the Fluff-master too lazy to sign in chapter 2 . 8/19/2004 Hey there. Whenever someone sends me a review, I like to go check out their stories in return, and I have to say this is great. The plot flows really well and everyone was in character. (I admire those who can do that.)I'm really looking foward to what you have in store next time. Keep up the incredible work. Lain |
Flint chapter 2 . 8/3/2004 Pretty good, fairly dark; please continue. |
MirandaOtto chapter 2 . 7/30/2004 Raven needs some anger mangement, huh? |
Sliver Fox chapter 2 . 7/24/2004 I like much. I really like it...I REALLY hope that you go on. I mean REALLY. I LOVE LOVE this story. CAN YOU WRITE ANOTHER (not another, MANY) CHAPTERS? _ -Sliver Fox- |
Killer Moth chapter 2 . 7/16/2004 Good use of continuity, in character, setting, and chapter length. I've no complaints. Look forward to the next one. |
Elucidation chapter 2 . 7/15/2004 that was definitly more in character. you have nice details about everything. Update soon, k k k? |
Under it all chapter 2 . 7/15/2004 Still, this is REALLY good! I wonder what will happen to Robin! PLEASE UPDATE! AND ANOTHER CHAPTER! I want to go on with it, if you don't...beware::laughs evily:: ::ahem:: You are very good at writing this story! (cannot get over how good this story is_) ~Sonya PS-Have fun. PSS-You better upate, I LOVE THIS STORY! ::this story made my day!Wee!:: |
Under it all chapter 1 . 7/15/2004 This is a really good story! I really likeit, I'm so glad there is a chapter 2 so I can read more! If this was a book, I would think you a great author! ~Sonya PS- Have fun_ |
nyaanyaanyaa chapter 2 . 7/14/2004 is raven gonna go back to the fight and lose control again? |
Misunderstood Demoness chapter 2 . 7/14/2004 I..I dont usually flame but..ROBIN ISNT LIKE THAT! ::clings to him:: HE CARES MORE THAN ANYTHING! AND RAVEN ISNT LIKE THAT EITHER! SHED NEVER HURT ANY OF THEM, DAMNIT. HES NOT THAT OBSESSED WITH STARFIRE. Gr..This is the 2nd flame Ive ever done. Enjoy.. |