| Reviews for Revelation |
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   Super-girl-straight-from-hell chapter 22 . 7/21/2008 HA HA HA LOVE the ending - short and sweet as hell! Great Fic - kept me going right to the end. |
| elbandita chapter 22 . 3/27/2008 I love it |
| DemonDogs chapter 16 . 12/25/2005 LMAO! OH MY GOD! Jack! I can't stop laughing! My jaw hurts and my teeth are chatering! |
| lamyka chapter 22 . 11/11/2005 nevermind. i won't flame. |
| lamyka chapter 12 . 11/11/2005 um...haven't finished reading but i just had to say this before i give a final review. have you ever talked with a rape victim? or at least read the accounts? so far your jack is not only out of character but completely out of character for a rape victim. i mean i'm still gonna read and finish but for now i'm a little saddened-rape has been known to make women f*cked in the head homocidal/suicidal or catatonic. coupled with the fact that she's now in a HUGE prison, i don't even know how she'd be functioning on a level beyond primal fight or flight. or even why she's allowing anyone, even riddick, to get within two feet of her. bah, i'll finish this review when i finish the story. |
| Megan Consoer chapter 22 . 10/29/2005 I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? |
| FluidDegree chapter 22 . 5/28/2005 That is not how you are going to end it...Right? Please tell me that there is more. Well let me know what is going on or someting Loved the story if ti is over. |
| bima chapter 22 . 5/27/2005 Is 'The End' the end? No can't be! To qick for the end! |
| mysterio chapter 21 . 5/27/2005 Oh man, Riddick is in for it now! I like how Jack and Riddick aren't communicating, I find it quite humorous how they can be a tad too slow to figure out they need to talk to eachother. Jack never seemed the type to want kids and a home and dear Lord a white picket fence, but that's just my opinion. Nice job! |
| FitMama chapter 21 . 5/10/2005 Man, I wish Riddick would start thinking with his other head. How would he feel if Jack let some other guy go down on her while she was drunk? O.k., 2 days without Riddick or Chaz to look after her, what's happened to Jack? If she's hurt will Riddick feel more than "just a little" guilty for everything he's done? Great writing. Please update soon. |
| bima chapter 21 . 5/10/2005 Ok I have a feeling something happend to Jack in the two days, am I right? Something terrible? Jack alone for two days... nothing good can come out... One month for an update that's long! more please soon, no better NOW |
| Amber chapter 20 . 4/14/2005 Hello, Love your story. Would have reviewed sooner, but just found it tonight. If you still need a beta, I would love to read any new chapters. I'm not a fictional writer, more research papers, but I know grammer and sentence structure well. Should you have the need, please email me at amberd Either way, DON'T STOP WRITING! |
| Trina3 chapter 20 . 4/8/2005 hey awsome story.. it sways a bit differently from most "get sent to slam" fics. i like that.. keep up the great work. |
| bima chapter 20 . 4/8/2005 I think Riddick would make a good father, protecting his kids and Jack with his life. Maybe it's not the right time but if they settle... more please |
| SleaHead chapter 20 . 4/8/2005 Love your story |
