| Reviews for Unexpected Allies Part III: Trial of the Century |
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   Pokopi123 chapter 22 . 7/12 Love this! Thank you for all three parts of this amazing story! *hearti |
| Pokopi123 chapter 20 . 7/12 So cute! |
| Pokopi123 chapter 19 . 7/12 He’s back! *happy sigh |
| Pokopi123 chapter 17 . 7/11 Tears :( |
| Pokopi123 chapter 15 . 7/11 I love the poem.. but man, this chapter makes me sad.. |
| FeralSins chapter 1 . 5/14 Binge-read parts 1 and 2 today, and now that it's half past midnight I gotta wait until I wake up again to finish this one XD |
| dreamerkins chapter 22 . 4/15 sooooo cute! ! |
| dreamerkins chapter 17 . 4/15 awe! crying my eyes out! |
| dreamerkins chapter 5 . 4/15 the random authors notes in the middle of chapters are confusing. they also make it look like the chapter has ended, when it hasn't. you should really remove them. .. or at least mark them better, as being a note... they do not add to the story in any way... they detract from it, making it look less cohesive, and more immature than the story itself actually is. all 3 of these stories have been quite good,and well written, if it weren't for the distracting authors notes.. |
| Tenzi chapter 4 . 3/8/2019 I'm addicted to this series. love it. and I don't usually do this, but there is 1 spelling issue I just had to point out for correction. in cpt 5 when Kagome goes to the riverbed, she crouched down, not crotched. crotch is another way of saying groin. couldn't pass that error, sorry. please keep up the good work! |
| FeralSins chapter 22 . 6/13/2017 is this complete? It's not shown as complete above so just curious. also amazing story i read all 3 parts XD |
| FeralSins chapter 8 . 6/13/2017 i really don't like this Kenirous guy. not at all. |
| seishoulover chapter 22 . 1/12/2017 wow .. love it amazing... i rlly enjoyed.. |
| Darknessdawns chapter 1 . 9/13/2015 What a great ending for an amazing trilogy. The opening of the story left me a bit confused but overall I enjoyed it. Even though you made me cry a few times. |
| Miketsukami-kun chapter 22 . 3/19/2015 Awwwww this whole series has been amazing, I seriously just blasted through all three today and they were all swiftly categorized as some of the best Sesshomaru x Kagome I have ever read! I really truly loved it along with all your descriptions, my favorite was right in the middle of a chapter in one book (not sure which one) where Kagome shattered his "marbles" I laughed so hard my family thought something was wrong with me hahaha, keep doing what you do cause it's amazing. |
