Interesting! The first chapter (Safe) is Stephen King's "Carrie"-esque. I'm curious, was that your intention? Or a funny coincidence?

oh... that's sad.

I...can't think of anything to say. But...it's very...tangible, I guess.

O.o wow...deep i likkit! I like all your stories! sweet update write more! have a happy christmas! O.o ignore that n_n;

strange and sad and wonderful. I rather like it -it makes me think. which may or may not be a good thing, but anyway...

oh wow oh wow!

I've never read one before like this.

It was really great, reading it from Kairi's POV!