Reviews for James' Girl
Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
Love it! Actually I wouldn't have been surprised if all the Marauders weren't in love with Lily in one way or another.
Ophelia and Juliet chapter 1 . 8/31/2008
Aw, that is so sad! Poor Remy needs a hug!

Juliet
Guest chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
remus...

this was beautifully sad.
vaguely amused chapter 1 . 4/8/2005
oh, man. poor, poor, remus. ugh, im crying.
Jemma Blackwell chapter 1 . 7/28/2004
So sad, and so *angry*! A good portrayal of a guy in that situation. This is a little edgy, appropriate for a (our favorite) werewolf.

Now you have me wondering if James, and especially Lily (since she had the long term friendship with Remus), will notice how their behaviour is affecting him. I hope they would be that decent.

I, too, thought the scene on the bridge went a little bit deep, took a few liberties. But you *do* have to wonder if that was the scene JKR saw that gave her goosebumps, don't you? This is the first fic I have found taken from that and so far it is excellent!
LupinLover99 chapter 1 . 7/24/2004
i love this story so much! i lvoe the way you made remus so vulnerable and sweet and sensitive. sigh, remus... very good for ur first boy/girl fic! :)
Spitfiregoodcharlotte chapter 1 . 7/3/2004
hey! I like it! it makes sence that Lily and Remus would be friends being prefects together and all! Its really good!

Caro
asurana chapter 1 . 6/28/2004
Aww, thats so SAD! Well, I love this, two thumbs up!
Paige chapter 1 . 6/26/2004
Oh my gosh! That was great! Sad, but great. I love the angsty Lupin/Lily stuff. I think you should write another one.
blueskypenguin chapter 1 . 6/26/2004
Okay, I'm only for Remus/Lily when it's James/Sirius, and I hated that scene on the bridge cause I'm a devout Remus/Sirius shipper - Remus is not straight.

Despite this, I loved your writing style and you put it across so well I can't hate this fic. Keep up the amazing work.

NatalieJ

ps. You still haven't converted me. _
Austin chapter 1 . 6/25/2004
It was astonishingly well written and versed... Very detailed and thought out... shows true emotions people rarely see... Very good story...you obviously show absolutely great potential as a writer and author...id very much like to read some more if youd like to continue the story...Keep it Mary...again wow...very very good...
On-A-Rainy-Day chapter 1 . 6/24/2004
aw. thats so sad.

i don't like the idea of this happening. i like to think of Gay!Remus or AdviceGiving!Remus.

but as always you wrote this very well. lily was cute. great job!