Oh. I liked that.

You should right another like a sequel.

But it should be in Jack's POV.

Aw, Will was so cute in this, and I can just imagine Jack coaching him, Will shutting his eyes, tipping, being mocked, lol. Awesome story- 5/5.

(pictures Jack talking about body parts or sex to anybody) (dies laughing)

How cute! Gotta love this couple )

Strangely, while reading this I kept having the image of Jack running up and down his ship stark naked... I wonder if his crew would say anything to seeing that, or would they take it all in stride...

I think I think too much XD

That was hilarious! It was true to the characters and very, VERY, awkward, loved the cute embarassment.

now im confused. are we talking about jack and will or jack and some girl?...OR has jack gone gay? *gasp*

I love the randomness of Jack - gotta love him.

yes you did, but i hope that you continue. it's just so sweet!

I liked this a lot. Are you planning on doing a longer piece, about how they got together or something like that? I'd enjoy reading that...

This is very sweet, very nicely written/expressed. Will's so sweet/shy in this and it's funny/cute tht Jack attempts to coach 'clueless' Will abt body parts. It made me chuckle at the image it made. Very wonderful imagery there. Would be wonderful is there's another part to follow this up, prehaps on Jack's pov or something else?

And I think you will do great in POTC fandom. Welcome to the Carribean luv :D

is your first PotC fic? well you know what I mean. I thought you had more... anyway, me loves our blushing Will! he's so cute! *pets him*