I love this piece with a passion, it is beautiful. Though, you might want to work on your summary. For such a brilliant piece it is such a drab summary.

sad sad so vary sad. why they have to die. slap slap my self. my bad. good sory i like it. i was beging to think raven was going to free herself and save both of them. o well still great story!

That was beautiful. That's all I can sum it up as: beautiful.

Holy mother******* sh**; I loved it. I loved it so much I am still in disbelief about how brilliant it is. Beautifully morbid.

oh my god. that was just...so sweet and yet endlessly depressing...i'm gonna go cry now...

There are no words to describe this story, it's beauty and emotion.

I don't know if you will appreciate honest criticism, but I do-so what the hell...First, it's hard to write in first person present tense, so the few problems you had with shifting tense were understandable. Overall, pretty good job. Now, the good part-The Story was excellent. Great imagery, original. You have a good imagination and talent as a storyteller-your involved me in the story, and broke my heart. Nice Job! ~Vin

it was such a great made me all weepy.

By the way Snorky is a cool name...

This was so deep and more than frightening. You are truly a good author, keep writing! This goes on my faves list.

love the last line!

that was so descriptive and it didn't really sound tlike Beastboy, but I figure he probably would sound more serious if that happened. It's so sad though, I almost cried.

aahh... that was just so sad, and so sweet, and so scary, and so incredibly GOOD! I absolutely loved it! Good job! :)

Oh wow, oh wow, oh wow... sorry, if I don't stop feel free to slap me! You have no idea how great this story is. I mean, seriously, I loved it, and I'm sure that anyone else who's read it has told you the same thing. So morbid... but in a good way. Now I'll never be able to look at diamonds again...

The way you've played on the whole Terra thing was fantastic. I'm not really a RaeBB fan, and I kinda like Terra, so I felt really sorry for her when BB jumped (I felt sorry for BB too, but he was sad: I think in some way he needed that "realese"). I mean, imagine living with all the guilt...

Very good job, you're a good writer,

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man...you just made my mascara run! wait..no..i dont wear mascara! haha. that story was awesum though. two very tear covered thumbs up!

I shivered as I read the last few lines. A lot of shivering. And that's weird coming from me. So...wow. That was creepy and angsty and I loved it.