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Ferretess chapter 17 . 4/21 it’s been so long that i doubt you’ll read this, but i’m sure you have a reason for not posting the sequel and that’s perfectly fine. as much as it pains me not to know how this story continues... it’s absolutely heart wrenching and you do such a great job of toying with the reader’s emotions. i know some other reviewers have pointed out some minor things like snape not being a pureblood and sirius’ parents’ names being wrong but it really isn’t hard to see that this was written before we ever knew that information! and for the most part, it doesn’t feel dated at all. you’ve crafted a gripping, intense, emotional story, and even without the sequel, you’ve given enough closure for it to feel like a complete story. i really enjoyed reading it! |
Guest chapter 3 . 2/6/2019 Snape was not a pure blood he was a half blood |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/6/2019 Im pretty sure Sirius family would not have had a good relationship with the snapes. HIs father was muggle and given their pureblood obsession that seems very unlikely |
lovian chapter 17 . 12/9/2018 Are you ever going to write the sequel? If you have anything, even if it's just a few sentences or maybe a rough plan where this was headed, please let us know! Your story is literally perfect and it drives me insane not knowing how your version of events ends |
Meraki7734 chapter 17 . 11/7/2018 THERES NO SEQUEL! I CHECKED DX OMGOMGOMG! If you could just email me how it end I'll forever thank you! SIRIUS MY BABY! CMERE! YOU LEFT ME ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT WITH THIS FIC YOU MONSTER! HOW DARE YOU END IT LIKE THAT! Don't mind me... just gonna scream. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHh |
AshenMoon42 chapter 17 . 8/16/2018 Wow. That was ... dark. And sad (Tibby...!). And brilliant. I love it. Wow. Yeah. Okay, real review now. There were only a couple little mistypes, but otherwise no SPaG mistakes or plotholes or anything. It was really well written and each chapter flowed into the next. The portrayal of the characters was also really good, especially Sirius and Regulus. Well done! Where's the sequel? |
Guest chapter 17 . 7/3/2017 rulerofthehellhounds The sequel is not posted. And this story was finished in 2005. I'm really upset that I can't find the sequel tbh skahsksjsksk |
RulerOfTheHellhounds chapter 17 . 2/10/2017 For all of those people who are saying 'Please Continue'... the authors note at the end says that there is a sequel called Lost |
LeonDesdichard chapter 17 . 10/21/2015 Please continue this |
Guest chapter 17 . 5/5/2015 Continue! I love it! |
Betty.S chapter 17 . 4/14/2015 Please continue! This story is amazing! I really want to know what will happen next…Poor Sirius. Poor is so sweet(weeping) What's more,how could James not worry about Siri at all? They are best friends! As Pro. Minerva said,they never leave each other! They are like brothers! They are supposed to be soulmates! How could he not care,not understand Siri like this? Well I think if James is such a git,then he don't deserve Sirius's care and friendship! Oh please let Sirius forget all the things…about magic,pre-friends,pain,and of course his father,and just live as a happy normal boy! That's what he deserve!After going throng so many things… Moreover,Reg is good. Hmm…he will tell James and Remus all that happened,right?(sigh)ok,okay,I just want to see people love and care about Siri. He deserves to be loved and cared. Sorry wrote so many things,no-senses,I guess I am just too excited. |
find me at blodreina chapter 17 . 12/7/2014 ...Oh. I have to say that I'm disappointed you have yet to post Lost, and that this was ended nine years ago. Like another reviewer who posted, I hope that this absence is for a happy reason and not something like your death. |
Luzith chapter 17 . 1/15/2014 Great job! |
Despense chapter 7 . 9/8/2013 I love this, not really canon...but I've always been interested in Sirius. And his past, so this is great. And I love your writing to! |
Shadows chapter 17 . 7/16/2013 Okay so first of all I just wanted to say that this as a completely amazing story. I went to your page and saw that Lost still hasn't been put up yet. Even though this story was last updated over 8 years ago, I really hope that you haven't forgotten about it. I would really love to know what happens next for Sirius. -Shadows |