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   Harmione forever chapter 1 . 11/16/2017 Please write a sequel about what happens after and maybe a Ron/Cho pairing as well? |
| beckah18 chapter 1 . 6/4/2014 Please write a sequel so at least we know what happens the next day in your mind please ... |
| animeluver7 chapter 1 . 8/14/2011 uhmm...well I like the story :) though you still don't know what happened with cho and ron in the end, but that's just a minor detail...anyway you should place some more comma's or something here and there and work on your spelling, coz it was a bit difficult to read/follow the story..it looked like you just wrote this stuff down as fast as you could without checking it over...i just say this as feedback, i don't mean it to bring your story down. i actually really like your plot :D i like these kind of plots :) |
| PhoenixBlaze8 chapter 1 . 4/11/2011 Wow really great story |
| musiclover1995 chapter 1 . 2/5/2011 this is class u av 2 do a sequel! |
| Pharies chapter 1 . 5/24/2009 I really liked this. You did a great job with the plot. I would reread it, just to make sure that everything is how it should be and whatnot. Other than than it was great. You really did a wonderful job. ~Tori |
| ARtemIs07 chapter 1 . 3/16/2008 It's a great story, but you kinda lost me at the ending. I mean it's not much, kinda plain and like a rush finish. Something like that. But great story! |
| Renaissance Lady chapter 1 . 2/17/2007 Nice story, but you seriously need to work on spelling/grammar. Please. You should have someone beta your stories, they would be more likely to find some of those things. |
| MadeleineElizabeth chapter 1 . 8/8/2006 LOVED IT! |
| asianhomie101 chapter 1 . 7/13/2006 I'm crying right now. This is a really good story. You are a great author! I hope you will continue writing under the Harry/Harmione romance. I'm looking forward to your next fic. |
| Death003 chapter 1 . 7/7/2005 well that was sickly sweet in ways... |
| Reviewer chapter 1 . 7/21/2004 Erm... Okay, good enough story line, but as you said, you're not that great at grammar and stuff? You might want to have someone go over this for you, because it would be so much more powerful if the punctuation and spelling were correct. |
| scorpio-1983 chapter 1 . 7/20/2004 that was good i kinda didn't get it at first and it made me upset at first but its good none the less |
| Adrienne Manaia chapter 1 . 6/25/2004 Wow, that was amazing. I haven't found a good fanfic for so long! I got so choked up at the end though. I almost cried. You are an amazing writer with GREAT potential. Please write more! |
| eclipsedbrunette chapter 1 . 6/25/2004 you should continue it. it was pretty good but not all fluffish. |
