From the pevious chapter, let me just say that it's obvious that Storm is an influential character whether it be horse or X-woman! I logan for taking care of Jubilee, it's kind of a shame that he doesn't have claws because that Railmaster deserved to be gutted! I the Native Americans in your story. They're so knowledgeable about medicine and so caring. I found it so ironic that the englishmen/colonials thought the Indians were savages, yet they did so many atrocities to the Native Americans that made them barbaric.

-kendra 3

What the h-e-l-l !that railmaster is brutal. The fact that he would go through such lengths as beating and starving her is so horrid that I want to believe it's unbelievable, though I know it's not. Poor Jubilee! Logan better go beserk on the town's people, who are doing absolutely nothing but watching!

-kendra 3

I Logan! Once again your portrayal of a western town is flawless! I feel bad for Jubilee, and I'm wondering when Logan is going to take action and get her! Also, I hope Ororo is in your story, you can't have Remy without Ro!

-kendra 3

Amazing! I how you're able to actually construct a 19th century story! So many other authors simply take a saloon and a gun duel and call it "Western". The fact that you added indentured servants to the mix is absolutely fantastic! Thank you for writing 40 chapters, it will give me something to read for weeks. :) I your attention to detail as well. Look out for more reviews later in the week!

-kendra 3

Very sweet - and surprisingly realistic for a historic AU.

i was sceptical about this story when i read the summary, but i'm glad that i read it and i'm impressed by your writing skill...thanks for the great read! i really apreciated it.

dogo

Well this took me two days to read. I had to stopped myself froming staying up all night just to finish this wonderful story. As much as this was a a heart breaking story about slavery, it's very true. Slavery was harsh in the south, not just the south but even South America. Did you know they were even killed for small offenses? It's awful that slavery was allowed for so long in the United States of America. A place founded on freedom and liberty. I want thank you for writing such a wonderful story. If you changed the names this could even be a fiction of your own, instead of a fanfiction. There were Chinese slaves or Asian slaves in the west because of the railroad. But it was always unheard of to have an Asian lady, they were real special. It was mostly men that worked in the railroads and such. I'm not very good at that point of history, just the concept of slavery.

Still it was very good, and you captured the speech fairly well. I could have sworn I heard the Cajun accent when Remy spoke. It was beautiful. Perhaps it was alittle harsh, but sadly in that time that was normal. From a historically point of view I thought you hit the nail. It was very well written. I don't think you should rewrite. Keep it. It's raw, it's historically close to what happened back than, and it feels real.

thanks again!

-C.M Cruz

Very enjoyable read. There were times when I wanted to smack Logan and Remy around their heads for being so dense but it didn't detract too much from the story. The way you portrayed Jubilee was damn good. Well done.

Damn...wow it took me three days to read. But I really love this story, it really has all the aspects of a good novel. I love how over half of the horses names where all after diffrent x men.

Kudos

Jees... Why are all your storiers centered around Jubes taking torture, beatings, rape, whippings, and insanly curel treatment almost on a daily basis? It makes for a little bit of a tiring read, once you've reade Knight and Squire.

Forrest

Ok i kno you finished this story 2 years ago but this was the best story ive even read on the website. I read the whole thing today! Amazing your an excellent writer!

so. long. brain hurts..

ok, seriously, I just spent the last six hours reading this, and I wouldn't have stayed all the way through the sleep deprivation and computer glitches (my laptop kept refusing to load chapters, but it all worked out) if I hadn't liked it. Not quite how I expected it to go, but I'm glad they had a happy ending. After all the shit they went through, they'd probably have kept you awake at night if you didn't give them a happy ending.:p I liked it, and now my eyes can barely stay open, but good job!

I never managed to review the story the first time I read it. But now... I'm still amazed. It's one of the best storied I've read in here, or anywhere else.

Beautiful

I loved the story up intil here, BUT I was led to believe that this story would be Logan/Jubie's. I was rather perturbed with Remy showed up, and seeing them do or have thing bothered me. So I scanned all of the other 200 reviews and I've decided to not finish reading it since you continue with a ship that makes me rather unhappy to say the least.

I do want to add how much I loved the Horses, Natives, and Horses in the story, and it is true, I don't about graphic anything but too much too often can get boring and even at ch. 20 Jubie's had kinda been beaten up a bit much. *wholly mother you must not like her* I'm willing to cheak out your other stories because of the high quailty of story telling and writting, I only hope that the other period peice is a Logan/Jubie's or I'll be very upset and cry. *LOL*

Peace out,

Lizzy